|Reviews for Crumbling|
| Ninaloveanime chapter 2 . 1/6
'mada' means 'not yet' so when you put into the dialog... it doesn't match the flow... just saying..
| Guest chapter 25 . 11/27/2016
I love this so much
There's some wrong japanese words usage but Idc as long u can understand the true meaning ( LOL )
Thanks to you I start to ship this two so much!
(( I really love the angst, humor, and fuji jokes lololol ))
| sakuzi-chan chapter 25 . 9/19/2016
Having Ryoma be abused is a weird plot point, but I did enjoy the team dynamics in this chapter. Kudos
| Guest chapter 23 . 8/22/2016
I forgot to mention previously.
It's impossible for a second parent not to notice what is happening when it's this bad. My dad simply allowed all this because he preferred to pretend everything is all right. Being unaware for so long is impossible especially if we know that despite all that porn magazines and silliness, Echizen senior is in fact a clever man who doesn't back down from any kind of confrontation.
I second what I said before: You have no idea about the subject you are writing about. Writing a drama/ angst story is good as long as a writer actually understand the subject deeply.
| Guest chapter 22 . 8/22/2016
You know, I was raised in an aggressive household where my mom was lightening her mood after coming back from work on abusing her only , yeah. But it gave me a very deep insight into the subject of a child being abused.
You watched too many cheap dramas or/and had too amazing life to even understand exactly what you are writing. It you knew anything about being abused as a child you would understand how terrible all this exaggerations look like. Considering the amount of favs this story has, Honestly, I am deeply saddened people don't understand such a horrible subject and are satisfied with a story like that.
Sorry, my past is speaking for me. But I do admit you have a very nice talent and despite the fact I jumped over some worst far-fetched parts, you do have a writing talent.
| ForgottenBlack chapter 26 . 3/16/2016
It was a great story i almost cried a few times, and I loved the TezuRyo fluff at the end it was adorable! All in all you really out did your self.
| XxTealJadexX chapter 26 . 3/13/2016
MUST. BOT. TAKE. ADVANTAGE.
XD yea no, still happened
| SternenDisaster chapter 9 . 1/14/2016
| RedCeleste chapter 26 . 11/9/2015
this is really good! Just a coiuple of question did Ryoma and his dad ever talk after everything went down? And did the cousin ever find out?
| seireidoragon chapter 26 . 2/26/2015
| Eric's Alan chapter 26 . 2/8/2015
This story was truly amazing! I seriously mean it, it is one of the best I have ever read! I was crying, laughing, and grinning like an idiot the entire time I was reading this! I really feel like you got Fuji's sadisticness perfectly (that is one reason I love Fuji)! All in all I am totally blown away! Awesome job!
| Guest chapter 26 . 12/14/2014
| Silvermist023 chapter 26 . 12/5/2014
Wow I loved the story...It's simple except that a bit of Rinko-Bashing but I lobed it
| Housefrau90 chapter 26 . 10/31/2014
So very sweet! I liked it a lot, even though my heart was breaking because of Ryoma's suffering. Thank you for writing this and I hope you never run out of inspiration!
| wittyusernames chapter 26 . 10/30/2014