Reviews for Honestly Harry - The Matter of the Furious Fugitives
jacobob1.jc chapter 23 . 4/19
by all accounts there should be 2 sets of the trio now as them disappering would have been seen and noones mentioned seeing them vanish
jacobob1.jc chapter 23 . 4/19
the whole concept of alternate reality is also wrong how youve written it because non of the people they were with saw the originals disappear and they would the second something changes also due to them nly going back 3 hours nothing they did could have consequences on the future past the 3 hours they went back as it hadnt happend yet, the future is constantly changing every millisecond of every day its never fixed please never do any time travel related storys again if you arnt going to research it properly before writing
jacobob1.jc chapter 22 . 4/19
not sure if your changing how they work or not but the time turner doesnt move you and due to the fact that they stopped everyone from dying the original 'them' didnt have a reason to time travel so a paradox should have occurred. and while im at it, you've said in a previous chapter that a paradox causes a big explosion thats not how paradoxs work they destroy reality as a whole, so either they would have to deal with there being 2 of each of them or reality collapsing please i actually beg if you still write do your research properly before including concepts you dont understand and probably brush up on your potter knowledge because youve messed up names more than a few times now same with the founders houses earlier in the story
Just William chapter 49 . 3/27
A minor typo, "They four griffins", should be "The four griffins".
Just William chapter 47 . 3/27
A minor typo, "sure Professor Bins", should be "sure Professor Binns". Good chapter.
Just William chapter 41 . 3/25
A minor typo, "in my closests" should be "in my closets".
Just William chapter 38 . 3/25
A minor typo, it's "Riddikulus", not "Reddikulus".
Just William chapter 28 . 3/14
Very good chapter, three typo's/wrong words, "I wouldn't put it pass your father", should be "I wouldn't put it past your father", "their lovong husband", should be "their loving husband" AND, "in piercing her story", should be in "in piecing her story".
Just William chapter 23 . 3/11
A minor typo, "whether their married", should be "whether they're married".
Just William chapter 17 . 3/11
Another very good chapter. A small typo, "did a barrel role", should be "did a barrel roll".
Just William chapter 16 . 3/11
A very good chapter - well done.
Just William chapter 15 . 3/11
Great chapter
Just William chapter 12 . 3/11
A typo, "a little longer to caste it", should be "a little longer to cast it". Good chapter.
Just William chapter 7 . 3/11
A couple of typo's, It's "Blaise Zabini", not "Blaise Zambini" AND "have to say fopr", should be "have to say for".
Guest chapter 55 . 2/13/2023
I've read all of your stories to this point thank you
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