Reviews for Boardwalk
Guest chapter 1 . 3/11/2017
Lolol this was a great one
Cammett Oelman chapter 1 . 8/18/2015
Elliot takes Olivia to a Jared Jewelry Store to pick out a ring to propose to Olivia and wants to take the Black Box with him to the Romantic Restaurant just the couple. The couple are sitting at a booth in a booth looking in each other eyes and then the waiter comes to ask what the couple wants to drink. Elliot orders the best bottle of wine for the two of them. The waiter leaves them and the Couple talk among them. The waiter comes back and the couple orders dinner. Elliot is reaching for the Black Box from his pocket and get up from his chair to kneel in front Olivia opening the black box for her to see the beautiful ring Elliot says to Olivia she is the best thing to happen to the family and he loves her and wants to be his wife. Olivia has tears in her eyes and says yes to Elliot who puts the ring on her finger to hear clapping from everyone in the restaurant. The couple eats their dinner and they talk among themselves and the wine bottle is finished so they pay the bill and get up and leave the restaurant to back to his place to spend time alone one thing leads to the kissing on the couch and the couple start kissing and take each other clothes off to make love to each other all night in the bedroom. The couple make passonate love in 9 rounds for a night. The couple plans the wedding for the next week on a beach with the kids and family and friends.
Ivonniva chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
I loved this. More would be soooooooooo cool.
DeannaK1022 chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
One word can only describe this: AMAZING!3(:
Kilea08 chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Loved it so much, wish it was a longer story instead of a one- shot. Very funny too. chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
I vote you continue this. :)
BASKETBALLEO4015 chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
This was really good!:)
Alexis Dawn chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
loved this! it was so adorable!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
please make this not a one shot!It is so good for it to be a one shot.
svugirl4eva chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
ckk211918 chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
That was cute! 3 Made me laugh like three times! It was just great and just so adorable. :D
edge15684 chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
That was fun to read.
JETHROluvsTONY chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
So cute -howzabout a twofer!?
liltboogie chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
This is really great!
AmberNicole16 chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
dude! dont make this a one shot! keep it goin!
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