Reviews for Down the Road
Skeptical chapter 1 . 6/18
hoping your story is grood, but the 90 mph ... would have killed Castle, people don't survive that kind of impact with a car ...
Guest chapter 20 . 1/9/2015
Castle said the I love you at least twice. As much as I like this story, it jumps all over the place. It's like different people are writing it, and forgot, or never read the previous chapters. Is it lunch, or dinner, is it breakfast or dinner? Is Castle upstairs, or down? His injuries seen to come and go too, depending on the paragraph.
Kinda all over the pace, but I like it anyway
Guest chapter 16 . 1/9/2015
Other than a few obvious mistakes (Castles bedroom and office are downstairs, and the odd jump around in the time line) I'm really enjoying your story. Thanks for sharing
Keep writing
Kikki
BigKahuna chapter 36 . 2/2/2014
Nice story. Nice story. Enjoyed it very much. Great way to bring them together and a great ending.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
Are you trying to kill Castle in the very first chapter? Lol.
CHICKENSLOVEBONE chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
This is great. I really like this story so far and I can't believe you're a first time writer, you've done a really good job
VIOLET1213 chapter 36 . 4/19/2013
Thank you for a great story.
Guest chapter 36 . 3/21/2013
omg are you going to continue?!
AravaT chapter 22 . 3/8/2013
I'm loving this take on their relationship!
lynn chapter 10 . 1/31/2013
Until this I noticed a few little ooc areas for Beckett. But here you are really OOC! you are making her look like a pathetic, drunken moron. come on! beckett is a classy woman, sexy, smart and strong. It is awful to see her portrayed like this!
Didine34790 chapter 36 . 1/23/2013
That was a great story! Thank you for sharing it with us !
I absolutely loved it !
renegade05 chapter 36 . 1/22/2013
congrats! great job. be very proud of yourself.
Gillesinlove chapter 20 . 1/22/2013
Hi,

Sorry for not letting a review before but I was too captivated by te reading. I would like t congratulate you for this story, your writing. It's a very interesting interpretation of these events. I have to stop my reading for now, but I'm looking the next chapters tonight.

I have a special resquest to you. Actually I am a french author and if you're okay with this ; I would like to translate your fic in french. Of course you remind the original author and your name and the lin of the fiction will be clearly mentionned. I have already done this before, with a fiction from glo1196
s/8079216/1/Oh-Castle-traduction-fran%C3%A7aise
If you're on board with this let me know.

Looking forward an answer. Thank you to this writing.
Regards.
CRB chapter 36 . 1/21/2013
That... was way too much fun. I was afraid I'd wake the house up laughing.
magicandheroes chapter 24 . 1/21/2013
i knew the "always" at the end was coming before i even scrolled down past "thank you."
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