|Reviews for Somewhat the Beginning|
| Guest chapter 46 . 3/5
I think the Next step would be to focus on Ashley's Pregnancy. Also focus on how Ben feel's about his impending fatherhood. You could do a chapter for Tom to give Ben some advice on being a dad. You can also add in not just how Ashley's spikes might affect the Baby(I Vote BOY!)but how Ben's Spikes could affect the Baby to. You also mentioned how Ashley and Ben would get Married after the Baby's Born.
You can also use how Anne and Lexie were took by Karen to give you some idea's on how you want to write the next few chapter's of this story. I can't for you to Update I Love this story very much so PLEASE UPDATE SOON! and remember I Vote BOY!
| cubelixa1 chapter 46 . 2/10
Don't stress yourself out, Tati. Writing this story should be as much fun for you as reading it is for us. I'm sure you'll get back into it.
| FreedomIsn'tFree chapter 45 . 2/2
| FreedomIsn'tFree chapter 46 . 1/12
| cubelixa1 chapter 42 . 12/3/2013
You made a mistake, honey. That's chapter 41 all over again. ;-)
| Terminator85 chapter 38 . 11/27/2013
Why is it that on my screen chapter 38 is the same as 41
| Terminator85 chapter 41 . 11/27/2013
Ben's gonna be pissed at the Charleston Militia.
| cubelixa1 chapter 41 . 11/26/2013
Honey and pickles?! Classy. lol
What did I win? Just kidding. ;-)
| Terminator85 chapter 40 . 11/21/2013
OMFG SHE'S PREGNANT
| cubelixa1 chapter 40 . 11/20/2013
I guess somebody's a bit pregnant. lol
| cubelixa1 chapter 39 . 11/14/2013
How old is Ben again in your story? I know Ashley is 20.
| cubelixa1 chapter 38 . 11/13/2013
They did it! So sweet. Ben should have an Ashley in the show too. He would deserve it.
| cubelixa1 chapter 37 . 11/8/2013
Have you actually written Connor instead of Ben!? How cute is that! I wonder what Sigmund Freud would say to that. Ok jokes aside, I really enjoyed reading this chapter (not just because it made me laugh at the end). ;-)
| FreedomIsn'tFree chapter 32 . 9/1/2013
When are you going to update? I want to read more and could you maybe check my falling skies fanfics out? Thanks! Love your story!
| Guest chapter 32 . 8/29/2013
Great fanfic so far I update soon. By the way I'm not sure if this is the direction you're going but I'm predicting that Karen may use Hal's frustration toward Ashley and Ben to use him.