Reviews for Pyramid Head James S Baby
MarkScyther chapter 4 . 2/21/2014
Grammar and spelling could use improvement. Much Improvement because I notice run-on sentences where there should be periods in certain spots. Subside from that, This story is wonderful! I love, love, love the plot! Keep up the good work.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/1/2013
Oh man. You should have had those nurses deliver Jamie lol
Guest chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
You should do more silent hill fics! There amazing
Guest chapter 4 . 10/12/2013
Ha ha this is so cute :D
yaoiPotatoLover chapter 4 . 7/10/2013
Lol wtf i loved it,!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
It was good until you misspelled Silent Hill, please fix it, it is a weird OCD thing.
TEAM SasuNaruHina chapter 4 . 5/21/2013
contuie
Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
Oooohhhhh i luv this story only u can make scary monsters seem sexy \(_)/ lol wish there were more wen i played silent hill i always thought of pairings like that great job hope u write more im not a member but im emily XD
Guest chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
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Kichy-chan chapter 4 . 11/26/2012
awww! i think you should write a sequal! and have the boys growing up and then fall in love with each other!
grandshadowseal chapter 4 . 11/26/2012
Ha,ha! Cute! :D
Saiyan Mother chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Please have a Beta go over this. Lots of grammar errors that are very distracting.
TEAM SasuNaruHina chapter 3 . 11/24/2012
contuie
grandshadowseal chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
Awww?! Are you sure it's done? The baby isn't even born yet! :(
sana-dracios chapter 2 . 10/29/2012
Continue please
It so random and i love it
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