|Reviews for The Quarry|
| Puerile2604 chapter 10 . 1/2
E. Aizen's kiss felt like an attack, dominating,intense and potent! HELLLO!
DAMN !when are you gonna update? forever and always waiting! hahaa
| Lonewingwriter chapter 10 . 10/22/2013
Since it almost one year since you wrote this story, I hope you update it soon to celebrate its birthday (hopefully on the birthday).
Yes, I'm still reading your stories and still waiting for more chapters though I might not have much time to review. But...I' still watching you, so do write, lol.
I think the spacing is a little bit slow though, and the chapters are too short, there are not much going on. I really do hope you will update it soon and make the chapter longer.
| AMUTOforever305 chapter 10 . 10/6/2013
This is so freaking amazing . Love it so much, cant wait for more aizen smexyness :3
| CaPiTalStoRieS chapter 10 . 10/4/2013
a, b, d. I loved the part where Aizne comes 2 orihme in his 'vampire' form. It was soooo HAWT.
Plssss update ASAP.
| CaPiTalStoRieS chapter 9 . 10/4/2013
a, b, c, d, e. f is definitely a no-no.
| Miyukino chapter 10 . 9/17/2013
Loved it! Can't wait for the update
| Chelty-chan and YeahWhatever12 chapter 10 . 9/15/2013
And first up, I am here to review this baby!
First off, I suppose I should mention, I have always had mixed feelings about the AiHime pairing, but you are rapidly changing my mind about it...Its just..so wrong it's almost so right (Does that make sense?)
I mean Orihime is basically, as innocent as they get and Aizen is dark, seen it all, knows it all, compared to him, Orihime barely knows anything (streetsmart-wise) so i guess you can't help but wonder what would happen if such people fell in love no?
What i love about this story: Orihime's character, again, her naivety isn't overwhelming, she's intelligent (I hate when people make her overly ditzy and dumb in their stories, it was proven in the anime that she's smarter than all her friends except Ishida. i mean she was ranked what 3rd in the class? anyway that's not the point)
She can hold her own to an extent against Aizen, i hate when authors just make her submit to him without a fight. In your story, you can see how she manages to actually stump Aizen sometimes, but he doesn't immediately fall for her, its a slow-budding thing that you pull off remarkably well.
I mean, Aizen is a pretty tough character to work with love, so writting about him falling in love is no easy task, so its impressive how you manage it without making him seem too OOC.
That said, my review for this specific chapter: Have I mentioned that I love this story's plotline. i love how you did so much with your own imagination and meshed it with ideas from the anime itself, with Ulqiorra and the others..I mean 'Oken variation' seriously...HOW do you come up with the ideas, all these awesome ideas, i never would manage it if i tried, and i've been told that i have an overactive imagination.
anyway, i am rambling.
I say ...a. loved it (no duh)
b) update soon cos i wanna know how Orihime reacts to her realization of her feelings. (also, i get the feeling Aizen knows she's in love with him already...did you intend for that? ...wait wait, obviously, since it's all part of his plan right? ..wait dont answer that, i dont wanna spoil the surprise!)
e) i especially like the part at the end where Orihime is like "She had never seen a smile that dark. With a shock that flared through her entire body, she suddenly knew. Knew what she should have always known. She was in love and helpless in the hands of a powerful… and utterly, utterly evil creature."
That was the awesomest paragraph ever. loaded with such...ugh, i dont know.
i dont know if you meant for it to be deep...but it was. it makes you go...woah. (I dont know if that makes sense)
And i shall stop here because this is becoming a novel of a review. (I seem to be developing a tendency of leaving extremely long review lately)
ALSO, Ive been thinking of reading one of your AizenxIchigo fics. I'm curious, i dont normally read yaoi, not that i hate it, i enjoy the occasional yaoi story, so i am curious to see what you did with that pairing. which story do you recommend i start with, there's so many to choose from.
| lapisdreamer chapter 10 . 9/13/2013
A. B. D. And E. On everything especially the lemon! I'm not big on AU's but you are so great I should have never doubted I would fall in love with this story too! As always keep up the wonderful work!
| geminigrl016 chapter 10 . 9/13/2013
Damn. Aizen, you sexy bastard. xD
I wonder what Grimmjow's gonna do now that he's human. Luppi would have a field day once he finds out.
Just a thought but...what would happen if Orihime was to turn Aizen human? Would make the plot too easy.
Looking forward to the next one. Thanks for the update!
| Tia chapter 10 . 9/11/2013
Aizen is sexy in any form only because YOU wrote him that way. Applause! I know how a writers block can be a pain in the arse
| jylener22 chapter 10 . 9/11/2013
She healed Grimmjow! And he did not take it very well...I guess that shouldn't really be surprising, but now I'm immensely curious how he's going to play into the story now. Will he be turned back into a vampire or remain a human? Depending on either way it works out, I do hope he makes another appearance.
Thank you for the heads up about the end (love you for that, my friend!), but I managed to read the last line and it seems to me as though she has just figured out exactly who and what Aizen is. Wow! Didn't expect that to happen! So, what will she do? And what about her friends? Maybe she'll have some qualms about being in league with a vampire, but I'm positive that if Ichigo went after Aizen that she would jump in the middle to save the one she loves...romantically. Wonder if that's where you're going with this? Hmmm...where exactly will this go next? Can't wait to find out! :)
| kisagi chapter 10 . 9/10/2013
A B "Aizen is a HOT vampire". I especially like the part at the end where orihime finally figures it out that Aizen is an actual vampire, update soon cuz I need good reading material for my college classes
| nypsy chapter 10 . 9/8/2013
poor grimmy! wonder if he will be re-turned by aizen
now ori knows he is bad, but not he's a vamp-will she try to redeem him or to harden her heart against him so she can leave him? so curious
| Flare-Flare chapter 10 . 9/8/2013
You are so sweet to keep devoting chapters to me. I feel quite spoiled. *_*
You were right when you said I would love this chapter. My favorite part was the scene where Aizen was thinking about how he wanted to take Orihime right there in the woods amongst all the carnage and lick all the blood off her. Considering Aizen is a vampire, his plan is a little kinky haha. *cough*Iwouldn'tmindreadingsuchasexscene*cough*
Orihime returning Grimmjow to his human form came as a bit of surprise to me. I wasn't sure if Grimmjow would survive despite knowing that you like to incorporate canon elements here and there in your stories. If Grimmjow is no longer a vampire, he isn't of any use to Aizen anymore. Or is he? XD
Now on to the little lemon you included here. I love the descriptions you used for Aizen like his kiss tasting like "ice and smoke". I haven't personally read any other vampire related stories so reading your short descriptions on what it's like to be with a vampire is enthralling. Funny how Orihime can feel such strong warmth when in the tight embrace of a cold and terrifying "creature" such as Aizen. XD Hmm... lately I feel like your writing has been reading a little more like poetry. I enjoy the "flowy" feel of your descriptions. Erm, It's kind of hard to explain.;
Around the end, it appeared that Orihime might have Aizen all figured out but has also come to accept his true form. Looks like the only thing standing in the way of Orihime being sacrificed now is Aizen himself. ;)
A. B .D.
And... You edited the opening comment and "review letters" since you first posted this chapter. Don't think I don't catch your edits. XD *shifty eyes*
| FlowersN'stars chapter 10 . 9/8/2013
Yay! You updated this story :D I should be reading my book for English class but I just couldn't resist! So about this chapter, Aizen was sexy as always, Grimm kitty was being really mean to Orihime (bad kitty!) and I wish the last hot scene wasn't cut short! Also, the last line may have meant that Orihime knows about Aizen now...maybe? Really looking forward for the next update :)