Reviews for The Quarry
4thkage chapter 10 . 12/17/2014
please update...
i want to know the whole story...
huwaaaaaaaa...
4thkage chapter 5 . 12/17/2014
good acting from Aizen-sama...
to cover his true nature...

luv it...
Hausos chapter 10 . 8/3/2014
A definitely
ginian05 chapter 10 . 5/29/2014
that was sexy...
Katerina Ane chapter 10 . 5/2/2014
not only loved it wish you would update soon and also love aizen especially pairing with orihime, I especially love the love making scenes and fighting scenes. You are very descriptive. Keep it up :-)
Puerile2604 chapter 10 . 1/2/2014
A
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E. Aizen's kiss felt like an attack, dominating,intense and potent! HELLLO!
DAMN !when are you gonna update? forever and always waiting! hahaa
Lonewingwriter chapter 10 . 10/22/2013
Since it almost one year since you wrote this story, I hope you update it soon to celebrate its birthday (hopefully on the birthday).

Yes, I'm still reading your stories and still waiting for more chapters though I might not have much time to review. But...I' still watching you, so do write, lol.

I think the spacing is a little bit slow though, and the chapters are too short, there are not much going on. I really do hope you will update it soon and make the chapter longer.
AMUTOforever305 chapter 10 . 10/6/2013
This is so freaking amazing . Love it so much, cant wait for more aizen smexyness :3
CaPiTalStoRieS chapter 10 . 10/4/2013
a, b, d. I loved the part where Aizne comes 2 orihme in his 'vampire' form. It was soooo HAWT.
Plssss update ASAP.
CaPiTalStoRieS chapter 9 . 10/4/2013
a, b, c, d, e. f is definitely a no-no.
Miyukino chapter 10 . 9/17/2013
Loved it! Can't wait for the update
Chelty-Chan chapter 10 . 9/15/2013
And first up, I am here to review this baby!

First off, I suppose I should mention, I have always had mixed feelings about the AiHime pairing, but you are rapidly changing my mind about it...Its just..so wrong it's almost so right (Does that make sense?)

I mean Orihime is basically, as innocent as they get and Aizen is dark, seen it all, knows it all, compared to him, Orihime barely knows anything (streetsmart-wise) so i guess you can't help but wonder what would happen if such people fell in love no?

What i love about this story: Orihime's character, again, her naivety isn't overwhelming, she's intelligent (I hate when people make her overly ditzy and dumb in their stories, it was proven in the anime that she's smarter than all her friends except Ishida. i mean she was ranked what 3rd in the class? anyway that's not the point)
She can hold her own to an extent against Aizen, i hate when authors just make her submit to him without a fight. In your story, you can see how she manages to actually stump Aizen sometimes, but he doesn't immediately fall for her, its a slow-budding thing that you pull off remarkably well.

I mean, Aizen is a pretty tough character to work with love, so writting about him falling in love is no easy task, so its impressive how you manage it without making him seem too OOC.

That said, my review for this specific chapter: Have I mentioned that I love this story's plotline. i love how you did so much with your own imagination and meshed it with ideas from the anime itself, with Ulqiorra and the others..I mean 'Oken variation' seriously...HOW do you come up with the ideas, all these awesome ideas, i never would manage it if i tried, and i've been told that i have an overactive imagination.

anyway, i am rambling.
I say ...a. loved it (no duh)
b) update soon cos i wanna know how Orihime reacts to her realization of her feelings. (also, i get the feeling Aizen knows she's in love with him already...did you intend for that? ...wait wait, obviously, since it's all part of his plan right? ..wait dont answer that, i dont wanna spoil the surprise!)

e) i especially like the part at the end where Orihime is like "She had never seen a smile that dark. With a shock that flared through her entire body, she suddenly knew. Knew what she should have always known. She was in love and helpless in the hands of a powerful… and utterly, utterly evil creature."
That was the awesomest paragraph ever. loaded with such...ugh, i dont know.
i dont know if you meant for it to be deep...but it was. it makes you go...woah. (I dont know if that makes sense)

And i shall stop here because this is becoming a novel of a review. (I seem to be developing a tendency of leaving extremely long review lately)

ALSO, Ive been thinking of reading one of your AizenxIchigo fics. I'm curious, i dont normally read yaoi, not that i hate it, i enjoy the occasional yaoi story, so i am curious to see what you did with that pairing. which story do you recommend i start with, there's so many to choose from.
lapisdreamer chapter 10 . 9/13/2013
A. B. D. And E. On everything especially the lemon! I'm not big on AU's but you are so great I should have never doubted I would fall in love with this story too! As always keep up the wonderful work!
geminigrl016 chapter 10 . 9/13/2013
Thank you!

Damn. Aizen, you sexy bastard. xD
I wonder what Grimmjow's gonna do now that he's human. Luppi would have a field day once he finds out.
Just a thought but...what would happen if Orihime was to turn Aizen human? Would make the plot too easy.

Looking forward to the next one. Thanks for the update!
Tia chapter 10 . 9/11/2013
Aizen is sexy in any form only because YOU wrote him that way. Applause! I know how a writers block can be a pain in the arse
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