|Reviews for Do Earthlords Dream of Palau Days?|
| destinyschild02 chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
Nice. :) A good homorous twist for the earthlords. Haha :)
| JeminiaMoon chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
I thought this was good. The descriptions in the beginning were a nice way to start, and I like the peaceful tone that you used in the beginning. Putting the onomatopoeia in bold was good too-you could almost see the harshness of the sound because of it.
The one thing I wasn't sure of was the line [the charming isles of Palau were just so wonderfully, very, very, suited for it.] The word 'wonderfully' seems to be out of place; I think the word 'wonderful' instead would be a stronger sentence. It's your call, though, not mine.
Overall, a very nice little drabble. You have excellent tone and imagery, so keep it up!