Reviews for Time and the Trickster
WonderfulWhovian chapter 4 . 7/1
I absolutely love your stories with Rose. I like both your original adventures and modified episodes. And Rose/Doctor kid! And Rose's kid was her roommate in college! Honestly, I think you are quite ingenious. One question I have is who did Rose lose in a war? Other than that, you are amazing.
Guest chapter 49 . 5/19
Started with the Seventh?! Well that is an interesting change. I'm glad I decided to have a bit of a reread.
horror101 chapter 54 . 4/5
Guest chapter 47 . 4/2
That was the cutest thing ever
Guest chapter 32 . 3/31
AAAAAHHHH THAT'S HUGE! Demons run?! So rose names her baby after her childhood friend like Amy did for Melody and Astra will grow up and be a ricer type character?
horror101 chapter 3 . 2/25
Whoa. Three chapters in and already, I'm sad. :( Great work!
Diving in chapter 32 . 2/1
If that's not one big spoiler, I don't know what it is. Argh! Not fair! Leaving us hanging like that.
Guest chapter 31 . 1/10
Hi um, hate to point this out, thought that it was a coincidence at first, but you've been spelling the word 'quiet ' wrong for chapters now. Thought that you ought to know, to save you from embarrassing situations in the future. Love the story arc!
Guest chapter 10 . 1/10
Thane is a great villain, maybe you should give him morals.
Falling Right Side-Up chapter 65 . 10/25/2015
LOVE LOVE LOVE this series. Seriously. Adore it.
Summer Leah chapter 40 . 6/12/2015
I love this story, but there are a lot of typos. Big difference between 'spotted' and 'stopped.'
Summer Leah chapter 30 . 6/12/2015
I loved "I'll alert the Spain UNIT division that you're coming." "Yeah, that might be a good idea." I wish we'd see the Doctor more but at the same time love that Rose is doing it without him.
Diving in chapter 65 . 5/20/2015
It's a good thing you started writing, what's with those sneak peek. If you ever decide to publish your stories, please tell me, so I can rush to buy them.
GirlWithACurl chapter 1 . 5/3/2015
Rereading your delightful stories as I await your next update. :)
I am a bit of a grammar geek, though...

"attacked by a living Mona Lisa straight up of its frame." - I think you mean "straight OUT of its frame".

"October had typical for the average university students: "- did you mean "had been typical"? Still doesn't sound quite right with the part after the colon... Maybe "October had been typical for AN average university student: ..."? This one is tricky. Hope I didn't make things more confusing :)

"and she'd arrived after the death of King Edward and the rise of Queen Mary." -there should be a "before" before "the rise of Queen Mary". Or "between" instead of the word "after".

Also there is some dubious punctuation in a few places.

Please understand that I'm trying to be helpful. Your stories are brilliantly plotted. I just recommend that you and your beta look a bit more carefully, because mistakes like these can make reading a bit bumpy.
Miss Snazzy chapter 41 . 3/29/2015
Aww. This was a sweet chapter.
I imagine the Doctor alerted Benton to his presence on purpose. Lol.
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