Reviews for A City Upon A Hill
SaintMichael95 chapter 5 . 8/28/2017
Wow this is a very interesting and well written story, it's really too bad that you've abandoned it and all f your other stories. It just means you're a typical fanfiction author
DaToskin chapter 1 . 12/1/2016
So, you were able to combine Deus Ex, Mass Effect, Ghost in the Shell and bit of Halo. Wow. Motherfreaking wow.
Vovan1 chapter 5 . 10/2/2016
Finally, a Deus Ex/Mass Effect crossover that incorporates Sarif's ending and actually goes transhuman. I like the developed timeline very much. The mention of Typhoon, CASIE and Icarus implants was great. Glad, that you remember about the electrogravity systems. Please, update this story!
2lazy2login chapter 5 . 9/10/2016
The premise is flawed. If humans are getting nano augs and the line between organic and synthetic is being rapidly eliminated then they've effectively achieved the "Synthesis" ending of ME3 and the Reapers' motivations now make even LESS sense than they did before.

If Nazara was going to do something in this situation it should probably be updating the others on the situation and watching to see how it develops. Failing that, it should be working AGAINST these Templar chucklefucks since they're endangering a promising, potentially unprecedented development.

A lot of wank has taken place here and you effectively wrote yourself into a corner when it comes to any meaningful conflict. :P
Fernix13 chapter 5 . 8/17/2016
Oh man, one of the best fanfics out here, i did not expect nazara to ally with templars.

You are doing all of it just right, great timetable, intelligent alliance, devious templars, council that actually thinks, nice tech but no monopoly cuz im pretty sure council will try to upgrade plasma tech from union but still most of the cookies are in alliances box, good cerberus, fleet tactics are pretty... realistic, they are also flexible. The only thing thats out of the box is that whole teleporting-rounds-behind-your-ships but its not that big of an issue.

Awaiting next chapter!
Guest chapter 5 . 8/13/2016
This story is too good to simplu die. Please, continue it! Also, I'd like mentions of CASIE and such non-combat implants.
2Xenos chapter 5 . 4/9/2016
It's a shame that this Story be died
Guest chapter 5 . 4/1/2016
update please
OfAllTrades chapter 5 . 3/20/2016
Are the humans cripplingly overpowered? Yeah.

Is it very satisfying to read an epic Curb-Stomp in favor of the good guys? Definitely.

Hope the story isn't dead.
The Red Lurker chapter 5 . 12/3/2015
Ah man. That's it? I was really enjoying this story too.
The Red Lurker chapter 1 . 12/3/2015
Damn, that was a story in and of itself. I absolutely loved it! Definitely a lot more in-depth than I expected when I looked up a Deus Ex/Mass Effect Crossover. Wonder how that Hanar and other races will react when they find out their 'Gods' are, more or less, under the protection, and a part, of the Systems Alliance.
Guest chapter 4 . 11/3/2015
I wonder how liara is going to react when she finds out that the protheans are still living. Should be interesting to say the least!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/1/2015
Your world building from technological and settlement perspective is excellent. The only weakness is in your political scenarios. The Templars and such could be excused as an antagonist to Cerebus when in reality no US affiliated government would allow two such organizations to grow so powerful without being fully infiltrated by the FBI. The Frieden Union is where the real problem is. You can't portray the System Alliance as stable, competent and growing but at the same time basically ignoring the Frieden Union. Either the colonies joined voluntarily in which case the SA would destroy them even if they threatened to kill them selves or the colonies are conquered in which case can you ever imagine the US would ever ignore the occupation of any of its territory by someone else? Even if the government ignored it the population would be going crazy pushing for war to get their land back.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/1/2015
This was great up until the Frieden Union joke. It made no sense and came across as pulled out of thin air. No stable government would have stood by and allowed an outside group to seize it's colonies. It was dumb. To make it work you have to show the System Alliance government is as weak and broken as that of Syria or Iraq. You didn't and tried to show the SA was a strong and stable government. That was the unbelievable part. The easy way you should have used is just make it a rebellion of colonies against the SA because Earth corporations were screwing them or Earth was overtaxing them. If would have been easy to make it believable. What you di came across as a complete joke.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/17/2015
update please
311 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »