Reviews for The Lovely Bones what should have happened
Inigo Montaya chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
Love Of Blood chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
WOW! If only it would have been that boring of a story! Then many more readers would have ended up reading the story as well! NOT! I am so glad that it had ended the way that it had!
LuluCalliope chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Even if Susie had seen him digging the hideout, it seems a little unrealistic that her first thought would be, "Oh, he must be digging it to hide a body in."

I wish that all stories had happy endings, but unfortunately, that's not reality.

For what this is, it's very good. I wish that it could have been a little longer, but now I'm being nitpicky.
A Fan chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
That was fucking magical. Your like Shakespeare
Midnightangeloffire1 chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
its a good story and in today's time that would have happened but this was in the 1970s where you didn't think a killer lived next door people were more trusting then now you don't go off with someone you don't know you might if the person is a woman or they go to your school and you have classes or are in a club with them but a old man mr. Harvey age and acted like him you get creep out and want to get as far away from him as possiblie
Saphirabrightscale chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
True true. Girls should be more cautious when talking to strangers.
charchi8987 chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
this could be great... if it wasn't so rushed.