Reviews for Dawn and Shadows
JetTheGlaceon92 chapter 6 . 3/13
I'm crying ;;
JetTheGlaceon92 chapter 3 . 3/13
Snowpaw was starting to creep me out with all that talk of "herb mixtures", "herbal drawings", and "animal bones" O.O
Aside from that, though, this chapter was adorable! Especially the ending!
JetTheGlaceon92 chapter 2 . 3/13
If you are ever in need of any more characters for this story, I'd be more than willing to help!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
Awesome...! This looks very interesting! :D
Phoenix Flamelight chapter 5 . 9/6/2013
You used -kit in some places. Like Jewelkit and Yewkit, instead of -paw.
lionspaws13 chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
So good
little miss jolie chapter 2 . 7/21/2013
Um... I'm sure that cats don't know what Jade or Jewels are. So those names a tiny bit iffy.

Giang Tien of WillowClan
sunbreeze chapter 14 . 4/6/2013
radical story keep going
Song of the Felines chapter 6 . 3/5/2013
Love this book
WyldClaw chapter 2 . 3/4/2013
i feel bad for blackit, snowit and bronzekit
WyldClaw chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
that was freaky what the raven said
ponyiowa chapter 13 . 3/3/2013
I don't think you're doing anything wrong; it's just everyone else. :P Maybe the long chapters scare them off?
Good chapter! :D

-Nightstar of WillowClan
account no longer in use464683 chapter 13 . 3/2/2013
E-every 3 weeks b-but that's like a month. How will. Survive without your presidiums stories. *sniffles* update soon. Stupid Riverclan.
ponyiowa chapter 12 . 2/11/2013
Wow, Seedpaw and Lilypaw. They really hate her. Poor Snowpaw. ;-;
Nice prophecy. I already told you that I liked it since it wasn't obvious, so I have nothing more to say than this: Good job! :D

-Nightstar of WillowClan
ponyiowa chapter 11 . 1/31/2013
["Let me up," she growled.
"You both fought very well," he growled.
"What?- no! What are you talking about?" Blackstar growled.]
Pointing this out just in case you want to replace one of those speech tags.

Nice, nice! ;) Very action-filled, and I liked how she didn't win with Yewpaw but promised to work harder next time. And nice dialogue, too. I loved the part where she was taunting Yewpaw to distract him.

-Nightstar of WillowClan
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