Reviews for The Perfect Doll
EveJ Hina chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
llazo4108824 chapter 3 . 6/16/2013
I love this fanfic you should make more chapters of this fanfiction.
ili777 chapter 3 . 1/18/2013
Aww, at least they did remember his birthday this year :)
Why was Hinata so mean? T_T
Hope she gets better later (soon later)
Update soon please :)
Naruhinalover20 chapter 3 . 1/1/2013
Nice chapter update soon i wonder what the nightmares are foreshadowing
Rose Tiger chapter 3 . 1/1/2013
Keep it up!
SullyR chapter 2 . 11/5/2012
Naruto! I didn't forget your birthday! Mines is in October and on my cake, I had you on it, with Sasuke too.

Sakura cracks me up: "NARUTO GET YA ASS UP!" Sakura screamed in his ear.

-she's ghetto, as you can see . . ( ͡ _, ͡ ; )\
Rose Tiger chapter 2 . 11/5/2012
Hinata is mean and nobody remember's Naruto's birthday. Poor thing.
mikethepokemaster chapter 2 . 11/3/2012
it kind of sad no body remember his birthday but hope they try to make it up him later on in they story.
Naruhinalover chapter 2 . 11/3/2012
Nice chapter update soon umm i guessing it has to do with family and the maid is like her new family or somthing
crow chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
I liked the chapter very much. It showed a side of Hinata no one wud have thought about. Good Job (Y)
Rose Tiger chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
Interesting. Keep going.
Naruhinalover chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
I thought about this story more and i was wandering is she just sleeping and that is her room since she works there or is she really a...doll
mikethepokemaster chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
i like it and hope you write more of this story, and is hinata really a doll or is naruto calling her a doll because shes so pretty.
SullyR chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
I wonder . . . is Hinata really a doll? If so . . . is Naruto gonna try makin' love to a doll? I don't mind and I love the story so far, it's just that doll's scare the crap out of me.
Great story!

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Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
Like it so far
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