|Reviews for Old Man McKinney|
| AkaiMurasaki chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
This was really great, just like an episode! Thank you for the wonderful read.
may the muses inspire you to write more!
| Myriamj chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
Well, i love it.
Great history, excellent characters, good development, yes, it's really great history.
Thanks for write it.
| Ms Frosty chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
Wow, very nice, good job! I really Like the fact that all the characters are involved in the story, still there's a place for Arnolds' and Helgas' complicated relationship and a great adventure for kids. Keep up the good work!
| realityescaper10 chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
This was sooo good. You nailed the character's expressions, words and actions so well. The description of the house and all that was also beautiful :) Two thumbs up! You're gonna win that contest you mentioned for sure
| loonytunecrazy chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
| Nep2uune chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
This was a very good halloween story. I first thought that Ernie was pulling their leg. Like the stories grandpa always tell them. They are some very bold kids. I like the excitement and detailed details. I felt like I was with them. Harold is always funny for a good laugh. And Arnold and Helga hiding their feelings as always.