Plz update!

Ok so last person you'd think? Could be zeke or staci!

Plzzz continue this is really good & intersting!
I wonder who did it

loved the first chapter! Please update soon! Loved it except that dawn was killed first because she was my favorite but oh well, makes for a good story! ;)

Nooooo! Ezikiels only friend dawn! Come back what shall I do without any dott romance!

WHY WOULD YOU KILL OFF ZEKE' S ONLY FRIEND?! AND IT HAD
TO BE DAWN DIDDNT IT?! WHAT DID SHE EVER DO TO ANYONE?!
but the rest was good. At least zeke made a friend though. Sorry
For shouting. Dawn Is one of my favorite characters. Perhaps it is
better she died first so she wouldn't have to deal with future loss
and sorrow. Also pain. At least she went quickly and painlessly.

Update Please!

Update, because I loved the last one, and this one sounds good to!

Me: DAWN! (Runs to Underworld, take her soul/spirit, breaks into McLean's mansion and puts her soul/spirit into her body) There

Killer: WHY DID YOU DO THAT!?

Me: SHUT UP!

LOVE THIS

but i still like the other story... PLEASE UPDATE EITHER!

This is an awesome story, just like the first one. I absolutely love horror murder stories. I definitly can't wait for the next chapter, even though Dawn was the first. It just goes to show, not even then nicest people are safe. As for guesses. It could, be Ezekiel or Scott, to obvious. But to me, i think its B. He's so quiet and he's the one everyone is least likely to suspect. But it's still to early for any concrete suspects. Keep up the awesome work.

Aww...why DAWN? Yes I agree Scott is very hot.

Poor Dawn, but what a very interesting story. I look forward to reading more.

XD Justin pointing out how Chris has one light and a timed lock. That was beautiful! I look forward to the update because this is just hysterical!

Whoa, this is quite a dramatic start.

Maybe it was Chef. So far, the most obvious suspect. My other suspect would be Mike, or, more precisely, one of his alternative personalities.

Keep the good writing.

If Dawn was the first one killed, and I am EXTREMELY ticked off about that, first instinct would point to Scott, who has an 'unpleasant' history with her and is most likely to kill people who annoy him and/or stumble into the truth about the murders.