|Reviews for Coming Home|
| moon eclipse shadows chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
I like this. The version in my head is a little different, but this definitely sparks some ideas in my brain, which is something I always like to get from a good story. I didn't really like how Vyse's mother acted though.
| Baker Alchemist Strawberry chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
And another lovely one-shot!
I think these are your fort - you're excellent at evoking emotions and describing well enough in few words that you don't need long winded sentences, and the characterisation is really good too!
| Blue Rogue Linds chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
W-Why didn't I see this here from before? It's absolutely gorgeous! The SoA fandom was in desperate need of a fic like this! Fluffy Aika-isms for the win, yo! *confetti*
I have no concrit to offer this time around. This was...just. THIS. I don't know what to say. Wonderful use of emotion and characterization, though. Can you say fave? XD