|Reviews for An Older Sisters Love|
| YautjaOfEarth chapter 4 . 11/26
I love stories that build up the romance
Your doing a really great job
Can't wait for more
| Axcel chapter 4 . 11/9
That was a very sweet end to the chapter.
| Nutmeg Toast chapter 4 . 10/23
| Zaralann chapter 4 . 10/19
| Otaku97 chapter 4 . 10/12
Even if you end the doc here I bet no one would blame you and might even praise you for ending on a high note
Damn these 4 chapters have been good
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/3
please continue this fic i hope more lemon romance
| flame55 chapter 4 . 9/20
this is great
| Samusbresolino chapter 4 . 9/20
I'm so glad to see this updated that I will have to leave a review. Excuse my poor english.
1- In the beginning it was pretty clear you planned this to be an oneshot. Chifuyu's change of mind was too abrupt, I reckon it would take a few more "events" for her to notice that Ichika needed more affection. In the LNs she is despicted as just as dense as Ichika when love is concerned. It doesn't detract anything from the quality of this fic, but maybe in the future you could make a few changes?
2- You skipped quite a bit of action scenes and "main anime/LN plot" scenes, and I'm VERY glad you did that. Many authors feel obliged to retell the story to make their work fit more naturally unto the original work, but to be honest, that's a waste of time. Unfortunately, a fic will never be canon to the original and if the reader bothered to click 3~4 links to reach a certain story, they probably know what they are getting and are not totally new to the original series.
3- You are very talented at despicting emotions and eroticism, without even actually writing anything lemony. That's a rare trait, something you certainly should focus on. This is your gift, make the most of it! ... I don't mean you shouldn't write lemons btw, quite the opposite really since I'm curious to how you would do it and can't wait to see it.
4- Inspiration is quite a whimsical lady. I know that, so I admit it's hard to ask for an author to update more frequently. If they rush a chapter the quality will probably drop, flawing an potential masterpiece... But even so, please try to at least keep us updated ok? My biggest fear when I like a fic is that it won't reach it's planned ending... I strongly hope that you write this story to the end, and also finish it at the right time.
Best wishes from your fan!
| Luckenhaft chapter 4 . 9/17
This chapter's end was beautiful.
It was awesome. From start to finish pure romantic literature gold.
I'm looking forward to what this story has planned for the future with Phantom Task, and the little sister. Then again... I think your special skill is writing out what this stories main genres are. Not like there is anything wrong with that.
I'm stopping here now. I'm uncertain if this review is either me sounding like I'm playing down your writing skills and trying to build them back up, or... I don't know.
By the way I'd like to thank you, and the writer of Truth Be Told for sort of inspiring me of thinking up the ideal of what may someday end up on FictionPress if I gain the skill, and the confidence to make into an actual story. Here's hoping, My Lovely Complex(Name Subject To Change) can someday see the light of day, and escape my head. Cheers! (Takes a swig from my soda.)
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/16
yay you finally came back! and good for ichika and chifuyu, too bad for the others LOL, their love has finally blossomed, and i guess thats the end of the story? if so, great story!... if not, great job and hope you continue soon
| Velshard chapter 4 . 9/16
A good chapter, though a part of me was just happy to see a chapter at all with how long the story was left to idle along with the rest of your material. I do feel that you took the simpler route when writing this chapter, which could be a plot issue in the future depending on how long this story goes on. That said, I'm glad this didn't end on a scene featuring one of Ichika's harem having witnessed his and Chifuyu's incestual indescretion. Those kinds of scenes at the end of a chapter always seem to leave a bad taste in one's mouth over the oncoming drama.
| wizardgeek298 chapter 4 . 9/15
Great story and love the pairing! So glad for this and your approach to this is so realistic that it almost sounds like real life. Continue woth the great work! And also update please i need this in my like. :D
| firehawk213 chapter 4 . 9/15
I'm glad I kept this fic in my alerts tab! I hope this fic continues! I really enjoy this pairing and wish there was more!
| BoogieWonderland chapter 4 . 9/15
Well, you certainly announced the story's return with a bang, but I'll be damned if it wasn't a pretty bang. I thought it was that other Orimura sibling story with a very similar name but we got the update from beyond the grave instead.
Good job with the flow of the chapter.
| Kessen chapter 4 . 9/14
A wild update appeared!
And damn, it was worth the wait. Looking forward to the next chapter.