Reviews for It All Started in a Bank |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is an overwhelming and awesomely well done story. I rarely read incomplete stories because most often they remain incomplete. I really hope this one will be completed. Thanks for sharing what you have and I hope there is time in real life for you to work on this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting way to unify the verses. I'm interested to see where you go with this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found this story and I trully think that I need to watch again the Sherlock series... I seem to have something forgotten. By the way did Sherlock keep the orange blanket what do you think? I trully need to see the series again I just cannot connect Moriaty and his plans with Dursley. By the wai the bank robbery went completly unexpected. Since English is not my mother language I do not see the errors in Harrys speech. But I would like to know which parts you mean. Especially because I am still learning myself, even after years of reading in English. Maybe if you could add explanations to mentioned errors at the end of a text or let one of the adult explain to Harry how the propper wording would be? I mean it is what you do with children, you correct wrong grammaticBut it is okay if they do not want to do it on the first day... One think I still need to say ... I wished there would be more chapters if not even Harrys school years. But I know live happens to go in the way. The actual world wide situation does not help. I hope you are well and maybe I will get the message that there will be a new chapter to read... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lestrade. Lestrange. Love the word play. Simple but ingenious!. |
![]() ![]() Maybe Mycroft and Sirius or Severus? Any on of those two would be a great match. Acutually, I would love to see a Sherlock Severus friendship. Thank you for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward Sirius meeting Sherlock. Great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I miss this story sm |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story so far is amazing! I love the whole construct it's made of. Would I be allowed to translate the fanfiction into German and post it on ? that's basically the German website for fanfictions. It'd be an honour. Love, Lara |
![]() ![]() ![]() i dont understand why they dont just get to the point(i know the conversation is what it would be like in RL but even in RL they often dont come to the point and thats something i dont understand) |
![]() ![]() So great to see an update on this fic, it has been bookmarked for years. I enjoy the story line and characters, particularly the involvment of Greg and Molly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed reading this chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting. Just what did Moriarty offer too that whale Vernon? What’s his endgame with Harry? |
![]() ![]() ![]() *snorts* I absolutely love Mrs. Hudson she’s the best THATS CROWLEYS LINE *sobs* they should all live together and get Lupin in there and care for Harry Fuck off Dumbledore *whimpers* I can’t wait for the next chapter and Merry Christmas! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jack and Jill went up the hill and- *cackles* |