Reviews for It All Started in a Bank
Nalini-Singh175 chapter 16 . 3/5/2017
I don't understand why you had to go out of your way to make things so confusing for everyone involved. Greg Lestrade was all that was needed in the explanation and the explanation should have been given to harry first with no interuptions. it would give harry time to ask the questions he waned to ask, and should have been given comfort when needed. I mean for goodness sake Harry is five! At least Harry was eleven when he first learnt all of this in the book! but then again Hagrid had done a better job.
This whole explanation is so overwhelming and not answering anything important. Who cares about the fact thay there was a war, about the different statuses? Who cares about how uncomfortable Lestrade is? None of that f-ing matters RIGHT AT THIS POINT IN TIME, not when it comes to Harry learning about his parents, about magic, and about why he is famous. And let him know he's not a freak, and that whole your special, your the boy who lived crap was completely going against the idea that he isn't a freak. anyone would feel like a F-ing freak show after the big deal they made about it.
PrincessMau chapter 21 . 2/22/2017
Yay. This is awesome!
xXSakuraBlossomsXx chapter 21 . 2/16/2017
I love this story! it's really good!
flying chrissy 1976 chapter 21 . 2/12/2017
Interesting story! Looking forward to the next update
a-halfblood-with-attitude chapter 21 . 2/7/2017
This is such a great story! You've got to update it. I loved the chapters with Sherlock and Harry together, it's so cute! I enjoyed reading this so much. Well done! :D
lunaleechan chapter 5 . 1/30/2017
"not as good as what Mummy can do." That woman raised both Sherlock and Microft, I think her threats would make anyone piss themselves. This woman is my hero
gginsc chapter 21 . 1/25/2017
So Dumbledore the self righteous snake in this story. I have never liked the man anyways. Who would drop a child off on the doorstep of relatives who hated the child's mother?
XxXFoxieXxX chapter 21 . 1/22/2017
Extreme measures? The queen? No, worse, Mycroft Holmes.
Hahahaa beautiful! That's fantastic, what did Mycroft ever do to deserve the hatred of seemingly the entire magical community?!
XxXFoxieXxX chapter 20 . 1/22/2017
Ooohhhh. That's clever. I thought it would be liquid luck or something like that. Muscle stengthening never even crossed my mind but it seems obvious now! Really enjoyed this chapter!
GuardianDragon98 chapter 21 . 1/18/2017
The Headmaster knows Mycroft?

Honestly, the elder Holmes brother's position in the British government seems to rival that of all of Britain's Parliament!
AshPhoenix93 chapter 21 . 1/17/2017
I love this story, its AWESOME! Can't wait for the next update!
madmanmark666 chapter 21 . 1/15/2017
Absolutely fantastic story it's so hard to find a decent work of fanfiction involving these two franchises so just on that alone I say well done to you. I can't wait to see where you go with this in the future and I eagerly await your next update.
Harriverse chapter 21 . 1/14/2017
Exceptional timing. Does anyone know if Sherlock Season 4 is playing in the U.S. yet?
Kaorilamb chapter 21 . 1/13/2017
lmao they should be scared of mycroft
waffleiron72 chapter 6 . 1/13/2017
The insertion of Lestrade's connection to the wizarding worldLestrade wondered if he was related to any of the Potters that belonged to the world he hadn't belonged to since he was 11ruins the suspense and is thoroughly boring in its presentation. Get rid of it and make the revelation more of a surprise later in the chapter or story; maybe make Lestrade look nervous or suspicious when he hears the name, instead of outright stating that he's part of the wizarding world. Real suspense killer. Please reword.
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