lmao they should be scared of mycroft

The insertion of Lestrade's connection to the wizarding worldLestrade wondered if he was related to any of the Potters that belonged to the world he hadn't belonged to since he was 11ruins the suspense and is thoroughly boring in its presentation. Get rid of it and make the revelation more of a surprise later in the chapter or story; maybe make Lestrade look nervous or suspicious when he hears the name, instead of outright stating that he's part of the wizarding world. Real suspense killer. Please reword.

This is an interesting way to connect the two stories! I love it and can't wait to read more :)

Good lord, this is brilliant! Please update again soon, I'm captivated!

:-)

i loved loved loved loved loved loved loved it. it was great.

very good

I enjoyed this very much. I hope to read more soon

ok lemme get this straight:
1) petunia is dead
2) lestrade is rodolphus and rabastan lestrenge's older brother
3) mycroft knows everything about wizards
4) sherlock and john will raise harry and they care for him so he'll grow up being taken care of
5) sirius will (probably) get out of azkaban sooner

I LOVE THIS!

Hello there!
I just finished reading your story and I really like it!
I like how you write all the characters and am finding your story exciting!
I can't wait to read more!

Mycroft is awesome! :-D

Really enjoying this story

so, will HP be able to see thestrals now?

Very entertaining chapter. Enjoyed reading it.

Oh my. Wow. Update soon.