Reviews for When Missions go Wrong
gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 6/22
crazzyredhead chapter 1 . 2/20
super cute very much enjoyed this story wish there been more
nancy103 chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
Nice one shot!
SierraLarson chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
Reminded me of this one movie where this guy's buried alive. Or so he thinks. I actually don't know. But yeah, reminded me of it.

ANYWAY, I thought this would be a "meh" story, but it was actually pretty good! And the little scene at the end was cute. -w- Good job, Razzy-boy.
The Fluff Queen Lilly-sama chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
I would have voted for it if you had entered this oneshot to the contest. A shame.

So yeah it's really good! Having Videl fight in a restricted place, where she can't move as well as usual, was a really good idea and a clever way to have her lose. Good work.
Yukiko Shi chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
that was great story good job.
jimthebear2 chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
I hope you talked yourself out of making it a one shot!
Dbzlover500 chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
Aw, cute story! Loved it;)
Kakarot Son chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
Well... that was pretty damn good. Thoroughly enjoyed it. It was quick, strong and a brilliant piece of writing all around.

Great to see a DBZ fic from you, just once more :P

Son Goshen chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
;_; You shoulda entered it in the competition.. it's so great! :3 I really liked this one-shot. :D
serenityselena chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
interesting story :)
Just Mione chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Great story, thanks for the entertainment.
Dr. Blue22 chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Dang, that was intense, great to see your writing again man, looking forward for more
DarkVoid116 chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Huh, you totally should have entered into the TDS Halloween competition. It would have gotten my vote. I loved it. It was suspenseful yet awesome.

Glad to see you writing some DBZ again even if it's only a 2k word oneshot...

Nice job, Raz.