|Reviews for Son of the Night|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
it's NYX, and she's a titan...Not a god
| WizardingMockingjayWithABox chapter 9 . 1/19/2013
FINALLY! We find out who the mystery guy is! I like how you made Noah have just the right amount of awkwardness, so that it wasn't out of character. So now I'm just going to have to wait for the next update! XD
| SmileyApollo1 chapter 7 . 1/2/2013
| SmileyApollo1 chapter 4 . 1/2/2013
Ooo! :O Exciting! :D
| SmileyApollo1 chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
This is so good! I am totally reading the whole story!
| Floatfoot chapter 7 . 12/8/2012
Awesome job :) I love Octavian, that manipulative, power hungry little brat XD I'm probably in the minority though.
| WizardingMockingjayWithABox chapter 7 . 12/1/2012
You're really good at writing! I love your word choice. I saw a few grammar mistakes, but I'm an insane grammar freak so it's probably just me... I like how complex your characters are, but I need to hear more about Erin's deceased BFF! I think foreshadowing's okay, but it's getting a little much. Otherwise, I might actually become insane...that is, more insane than I already am. XD
| Floatfoot chapter 6 . 11/29/2012
Romans don't use drachmas- their currency is denarii, if I remember correctly. :)
Take a look over your punctuation, you have a few run on sentences.
The suspense is really building! I love your characters :)
| Floatfoot chapter 3 . 11/24/2012
I love this character... I love her Mercury abilities to use words as weapons and analyze people and keep the conversation flowing. I thought the attacking the twin brothers' insecurities was a little mean, but it gives her more depth. /am reminded of the Stolls /child of Hermes/Mercury
| Floatfoot chapter 2 . 11/21/2012
The action is really picking up! This is one of the first multi-chaptered OC stories I actually like.
| Floatfoot chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
Nice job! He seems quite far away from sue-ism. Great take on CJ as well.
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| LesMisLover88 chapter 5 . 11/11/2012
Hi! I'm from Reviews 'R Us.
This is really good! I'm trying to use constructive criticism, but I honestly can't find anything wrong with the story. You use good words, the characters are well developed, and you use good grammar, and use proper paragraphs and punctuation, which, to someone who's as obsessed with grammar as I am, is a huge plus. I feel like I really know Noah. Good job!
| Kipling7 chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
For a first PJ fanfic, this was brilliant.
I quite like the ending. I don't know why, but the whole "You are my son," seems rather poignant. Probably me just being dramatic. But I loved it anyways.
| liliths chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Oh my gosh, Jackie (The Proud CC Giver) recommended this story to me since she knew I was obsessed with Camp Jupiter, and I love your story so far! It's amazing for a first story, and you already have a good start with suspense. I really want to see where the plot goes next! (But I need to finish all five chapters first, haha.)
You should get a Beta; there are a lot of mistakes here and there, but it doesn't take too much from the story. It may distract the reader from the story at times, but it isn't obvious unless you're really looking. Unlike Jackie, I don't lecture, haha. I will volunteer to be your Beta though; the story is amazing so far! :)
This must go to my favorites ASAP.
Good luck for future writing,
| The Proud CC Giver chapter 5 . 11/9/2012
It's amazing how all the good stories on this site have no reviews at all yet the bad ones get over 100 or something.
Your grammar is improving! I'm quite glad to see that. It's made the flow much better as well.
Interesting plot; it gives me the feeling of build-up, which is hard to establish in any story.