Reviews for Child Services
Dissatisfiedcrapola chapter 9 . 5/19
I usually comment at the end of reading a fic but this chapter... I’m shaking and almost crying because there really are people like this in the world. Btw the story is beautiful so far, and you have my emotions wrapped around your finger.
ThatsSomeDeduction chapter 14 . 5/2
*slams head on desk* whhhhhhyyyyyyyyyyyy

*completely gets it. Hey I just stumbled back into this death trap called a fandom. "Stumbled" is to innocent, more like I was shoved down fifty flights of Lego paved stairs and was given a nod by satin as I fell. Damn you and George DeVailer for getting me back into this and giving me beautiful little gems only never to finish them. Thanks. But I get it- hell, I haven't written any fics since my girlfriend died back in high school. reading this I just might start again *college has wreaked me as a person and I'm not okay*... Anyways! Thanks for writting what you did, sorry to see that you never got to finish.
hyuu chapter 14 . 4/18
this fanfic is too beautiful and its by far one of the best ones i've ever readdddddddd
i have felt way too many emotions in the past hour cuz of this * *
you're probably not in the fandom anymore but i really enjoy reading this story :
Continue chapter 14 . 4/14
This story is amazing and cute and fluffy... Its awesome :D pls continue :))
Sunnyngo chapter 10 . 12/6/2017
Oh my this story is sooo nicejsjskdkkssksksk
Guest chapter 14 . 9/17/2017
aaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA MY HEART MY STOMACH THE FLUFF ITS SO GOOD I CAN'T HANDLE THIS IF YOU EVER CONSIDER CONTINUING THIS I KNOW A LOT OF PEOPLE INCLUDING ME WOULD BE OVERWHELMED WITH JOY IF YOU DID THIS STORY IS BEAUTIFUL
Matchmakingdove1028 chapter 14 . 7/8/2017
First of all? I absolutely love this story

It's so comprehensive and really goes deep into what the characters are thinking or feeling!
there are so many golden moments in this fanfiction but ill get to them later and right now ill just talk about the sheer amazingness that is this story

Child Agent!Antonio and basicallySingleDad!Lovino? a blessing to this earth
bless you
thank you
thank you for bringing this to us undeserving mortals

The story has progressed on so cutely and wonderfully and it was amazing how Antonio said he would just wait 12 years! 12 years is such a long time but I know if anyone could do it, it would be Antonio hahaha (he waited more than 12 years when they were countries didn't he?)

and on to the golden moments! My goodness!
My favorite part, hands down, has to be when they were talking about Ivan being the devil because i relate so much with the conversation that just happened in the car hahaha

Second is whenever Toni and Lovi snuggle! Worth dying for and my everything, thank you

Can I also talk about how cute it is that Feli calls Toni Toño and not Tonio like everyone else thanks

There are so many more but I can barely contain all of them into a single comment! So many things to talk about, so little time and space

To sum it all up: thank you thank you THANK YOU for making this story! It has been a gift from the heavens
I know it's 2017 already and the chances of you reading this are slim but i wanted to leave a review anyway
i know chances of you updating this are slim too but i do hope you continue it someday
HOWEVER! Stories or anything AT ALL should never be forced out! SO! If you can no longer continue this, it'd be sad, but I'm sure this is basically it for the story

thank you for the rest of the wonderful chapters you've given us!
I hope that you continue to write and enjoy writing as you go along!
Have a good the rest of your day and I hope you have a better time with whatever work it is you might have 3
gazal.blirf chapter 1 . 4/16/2017
I love Hetalia I love the story I love you Who maken the story Please update I dont know idf I already reviewed but anyway thank you
literally illiterate duck chapter 14 . 1/13/2017
I'm not sure if this review will ever reach you but I just wanna let you know that I really enjoyed the story. It was super sweet and lovely so thank you writing it!
Oceantears2 chapter 14 . 11/24/2016
This is the cutest fic ever. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
Guest chapter 14 . 9/11/2016
Wow, this is good! Please update soon.
midnightblue2003 chapter 8 . 8/21/2016
Dont worry bout your style! Everyone has their own style, and yours is fine :) I like where you're taking this plot, even though it's kinda rushed... You know, kissing that early makes it feel kinda, well, rushed, but I like it. Lovi's personality is perfect though, if you were worrying bout that. I do that with my books (on wattpad) too, so I kinda get it.. love this story btw, you should write more books :3
crying chapter 14 . 8/6/2016
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATEEEEEEEEAJ'DLFJ' AFGJA;DLGJ
Errui chapter 14 . 7/11/2016
This was a nice read although, it looks like you might've given up on it so I'll just make up the rest in my head. :D
Guest chapter 14 . 5/1/2016
Aww, this story is amazing! I kinda just found it, and read it in one go. XD
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