|Reviews for A Thin Line|
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/7/2012
thanks for sharing:)
| CynMar Rom chapter 3 . 11/6/2012
aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so sweet! I loved it! *sniff*
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 3 . 11/5/2012
that was beautiful it just wasnt long enough but theres alway future take (hope hope)
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 2 . 11/5/2012
well it took him a long time to let her know how he feels about her but im confused she loves him too why didnt she tell him so
| HaylesHayles chapter 3 . 11/5/2012
Really good short story, as expected :).
| samiam77 chapter 3 . 11/4/2012
This was great and I loved it! Perfect!
| puasluoma chapter 3 . 11/2/2012
Very nice :)
Too much sex tho
| babylopez2008 chapter 3 . 11/2/2012
Yay, he passed the test!
Shoo I would've told Edward the same thing when GE answered the phone that way. I wonder what the cashier was thinking, listening to the conversation.
| babylopez2008 chapter 2 . 11/2/2012
Wow... I never thought that Edward would be that insecure under all that anger.
I hope he can be able to trust Bella before the nit trusting breaks them.
| babylopez2008 chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
Eww, Edward, having Bella service him after being in someone else. So gross.
And ouch to staying away from each other. I loved how Emmett busted them.
| carebear309 chapter 3 . 11/2/2012
Great finish for these two :)
| Twi-Mom12292005 chapter 3 . 11/1/2012
This was a very beautiful story, and it was so like looking into someones RL. So i have to ask, are these characters a reflection of someone you know? You write from someone whose had some type of experience with this befor. great job doll, keep up the awesome work.
| sandraev1 chapter 3 . 11/1/2012
Loved it! They had their ups and downs but they made it happen. Thanks
| momma2fan chapter 3 . 11/1/2012
Great story! I saw it rec'd on FB! Thanks...
| SunflowerFran chapter 2 . 11/1/2012
Wow...Edward poured himself out there to Bella...