Reviews for First Kiss ReWriten
hiphop13Nevermore chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
Please, please, please, get a beta. I would be happy to do that for you!
BartWLewis chapter 3 . 8/19/2013
Nice story.
hiphop13Nevermore chapter 3 . 3/17/2013
It needs a lot of editing, but the plotline is clever.
bluelightsaber12 chapter 3 . 11/14/2012
OMG...why did you have to spoil it?! it was getting really good. anyways great job
bluelightsaber12 chapter 2 . 11/14/2012
good story so far. and i will check out ur youtube sometime soon. :)
Guest chapter 3 . 11/12/2012
awwwwwwwwwww that was so good and sweet i loved it :-)
Just helpin chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
I would have read this story but when I saw the POV kept changing I exited out. You should just stick with one POV per chapter. It's way less confusing.
Tokka who invent BeastlyRavens chapter 3 . 11/12/2012
The document skipped some words and this was a little rushed but other than that it was good.
Matoi27 chapter 3 . 11/12/2012
If the question is the sentece then the translation is "solve this and you'll get a virtual cookie!" xD
dreamwhileyourmindisjoyful chapter 3 . 11/11/2012
Solve this and you get a virtual cookie! thats it right? oh and grate story, i really liked it
n2a0d0i0a chapter 3 . 11/11/2012
Great! :D
Matoi27 chapter 2 . 11/11/2012
This is good :)
n2a0d0i0a chapter 2 . 11/10/2012
Love it! :D
thekillerrox123 chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
iz good
Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
Omgz that was so cute love it:-)
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