Reviews for Black Cloaks, Red Clouds
InvcShadow sux chapter 1 . 9/20/2022
Ayo! Beech! Finish this amazing story or else!
rogueofstorms chapter 58 . 5/3/2021
I know after five years it's a bit much to hope for an update, but I just found this story and would love to be able to watch how the rest plays out. This is excellent work!
Raeger chapter 58 . 2/14/2021
An amazing story to have read. Thank you for writing as much as you did.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2020
I love this story and I have been checking back for years to see if it would have been finished. I hope you are well and I pray that some day you come back to the drawing board to finish this masterpiece.
Guest chapter 58 . 8/16/2020
Shame this is seemingly dead. It was a very good read.

I think you’ve captured the dark reality and grittiness of what a Rated-R Naruto crapsack world AU would be like well. The politics and world-building was great. The alternate Akatsuki was great. I didn’t care for Tenten at first, literal who side character that she is in canon, but I ended up loving your character as she grew. Same with the other OCs. Well done.

The only part I found off-putting was Amaya’s alternate-reality power. It just felt out of place. I know it sounds silly to say this about something in a Naruto fanfiction, but it really requires a suspension of disbelief.

You’d think there would have been some alternate version of Kaguya who’d attained the ability and would just hop realities eating them as she goes. Huh, maybe that would have happened.
blood90 chapter 58 . 5/21/2020
rereading this for possibly the 5th time. its still one of my fave fics on the site, possibly 6th best? definitely the best fic where the main character isn't naruto, except maybe dreaming of sunshine...
anyway please update!
Aritee chapter 58 . 4/20/2020
This is such an amazingly and intelligently written story! I'm so impressed with how you've changed the characters and mythology but not in a novelty way. There's real depth here. The politics is strong. The characterisations are justified. You really use the full scope of the Naruto universe.
I know it's been like 3, 4 years since the last update but I'd like to give you some encouragement anyway. To me, this story is up there. It's way up. It's really special. You've clearly put in the hard yards and it shows. This is a work you can be proud of. You've got a hundreds of readers right behind you and we'll wait as long you want because this story is so worth it.
StoriesMakeLife chapter 22 . 10/10/2019
This is an amazing work. Believable politics, intricate plot and a good style of writing. / The only thing I reject is Naruto and Konohamaru raping girls. Yes, they grew up differently in this AU, but I still can't find it believable [unlike all other things in this fic]
Pratik chapter 58 . 10/9/2019
So what exactly is the plan ? Collect all the bijus and cast the infinite tsukyomi and live happily ever after ? That's the plan? Ridiculous absurd and just plain wrong. So fuck off noob writer.
The Hero of Reading chapter 58 . 6/1/2019

Ahem, time to reread this!
LrLlak chapter 58 . 3/9/2018
This is quite frankly the most epic Naruto AU of all time. Seriously, you have done an amazing job on this story. Thanks so much for writing it, and please, please, please continue it.
xenosaiyan chapter 1 . 2/25/2018
Holy shit. Thats all i can say.
Lyssasoulless chapter 1 . 1/26/2018
Sorry that this review is on the wrong chapter, mobile makes it difficult.
I have just finished reading all the c chapters uploaded so far and dear god I am really really hoping that there's just been a slightly longer than normal pause between chapters because wow I need more and I need this to be complete.
This is a wonderful story full of all sk kinds of interesting twists and turns and it keeps you on your toes and wanting for more.
This story has been wonderfully crafted and I really hope that it will be ended soon too.
Yume Nijino chapter 1 . 12/7/2017
It's good to see Tenten shine :)
Guest chapter 58 . 11/28/2017
This is such a well written story. I really appreciate how well you write fight scenes and war strategies, granted I have no clue about half of this stuff, but it sounds so legit. Like wow you could actually be a screen writer. I’m wondering how you plan to end this story. There are certain characters im curious about. Like Obito and Kakashi. Kakashi is a product of this universe so does he hold onto the ideology of a Shinobi has to follow the rules to the T? Or did Obito’s death still impact him? Actually now that I think about it did you even mention that Kakashi has the sharingan? What will happen to Kurenai and her son? They can’t go back to the leaf village after all of this
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