Reviews for Motherly Affection
Dark Magician Girl98 chapter 4 . 9/12
I don't know if it was intentional but I'm from Argentina, and in case it wasn't intentional, La Plata is Buenos Aires' capital. And Buenos Aires is Argentina's capital. I'm sorry if it was on purpose
amerdism chapter 6 . 4/2
Awesome but slightly complicated story, I hope to see more soon, when's the next chapter up
Guest chapter 6 . 3/18
Just wondering when the reboot will come and wondering what incident lelouch had with sayoko.
Lancer Knight chapter 5 . 8/10/2014
i understand your desire to improve your writing before fully committing to a universe as complex as the Code Geass universe but, i must say that your story so far is amazing and that if your still not really that confident you shouldnt be because for a first story this is so far very well done.

Just saying Love the story hope to see an update soon
Hn chapter 6 . 7/1/2014
You don't seem to give yourself enough credit. This is probably one of the most well written stories on the site. Add on NunnallyxLelouchxEuphemia and you have got yourself a damn good story. The only problem is I liked the way Chapters 1,2 and 3 were written more than Chapters 4 and 5 as they seemed a bit rushed. Please do not pair Nunnally or Euphemia with anyone other than Lelouch that's all I ask.
mfmxxx chapter 1 . 5/23/2014
Except Nunnally wasnt there. ;)
RCPMione chapter 6 . 12/12/2013
well I hope you get your second wind for this. I'll look forward to when you do. I particular would like to see Kallen and Lelouch behavior in this world, what amount of change would this bring.
Destrark chapter 6 . 11/22/2013
well, at least you'll return to it, so good for you.
Lancer Knight chapter 6 . 10/19/2013
I like what you have done with this story so far and hope that you continue it
Pandas Are Still Bears RAWR chapter 6 . 8/22/2013
Well that's a pity. It was going so well, I think that you were doing a wonderful job at keeping it cannon and smooth. (Although I did spot some spelling mistakes)

Hope you will come back to this, would really love to see this continue :3
RadioactiveCatMeow chapter 6 . 8/19/2013
Nice and interesting story. I can't wait to read more.
Dp11 chapter 2 . 6/15/2013
well this is cool and ya Marianne was crazy.
n0mster chapter 4 . 3/28/2013
Hmm, really like how Lelouch's harem is shaping up, I assume that Nunnally, Euphie, Milly and Kaguya are confirmed members? Hopefully, C.C, Shirley, Sayoko, Cornelia, Anya and Tian Zi will also become Lelouch's wives, anyway it's great to you're slowly moulding the various character's feelings for Lelouch as they grow up and their relationship progresses beyond the familial or platonic, it's unfortunate that your muse has abandoned you for this fic and I look forward to your (hopefully) eventual continuation.
n0mster chapter 3 . 3/28/2013
While I'm liking how your fic is progressing, I have to admit that I'm not too fond about Suzaku being a continued major character, he may be skilled but his idealogy and methods just rub me the wrong way. Hopefully he doesn't steal any of Lelouch's loved ones away from him (Euphie is Lulu's, haha).
n0mster chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Hmm, this was actually a really interesting start to your fic, your concept is intriguing and I've always liked Lelouch/harems so it's definitely to my liking. Heck I even think that Nunnally would go well in Lelouch's harem, her feelings for him already border on romantic at least, so it's not really by any stretch of the imagination for them to be together as well.
It's unfortunate that you're not continuing this though, it would've been entertaining to see Lelouch with the many women who were in love with him/affectionate toward him.
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