Reviews for Motherly Affection
Republic Che chapter 6 . 10/7
Hopefully you come back to this story because really do like it!
Silent Roar chapter 6 . 6/30
Far be it form me to merely echo the voices of others intentionally, but I am compelled to agree; I found your fic anything but unpolished. This was a very interesting opening to a an AU CG universe that didn't fail to capture and hold my attention from the very start.

I can only hope that you are sincere in your vow to return to this piece once you feel you've gained more confidence in yourself. Best wishes.
Akuma-Heika chapter 6 . 1/3
I hope the reboot comes soon!
Dark Magician Girl98 chapter 4 . 9/12/2015
I don't know if it was intentional but I'm from Argentina, and in case it wasn't intentional, La Plata is Buenos Aires' capital. And Buenos Aires is Argentina's capital. I'm sorry if it was on purpose
amerdism chapter 6 . 4/2/2015
Awesome but slightly complicated story, I hope to see more soon, when's the next chapter up
Guest chapter 6 . 3/18/2015
Just wondering when the reboot will come and wondering what incident lelouch had with sayoko.
KingChaot1c chapter 5 . 8/10/2014
i understand your desire to improve your writing before fully committing to a universe as complex as the Code Geass universe but, i must say that your story so far is amazing and that if your still not really that confident you shouldnt be because for a first story this is so far very well done.

Just saying Love the story hope to see an update soon
Hn chapter 6 . 7/1/2014
You don't seem to give yourself enough credit. This is probably one of the most well written stories on the site. Add on NunnallyxLelouchxEuphemia and you have got yourself a damn good story. The only problem is I liked the way Chapters 1,2 and 3 were written more than Chapters 4 and 5 as they seemed a bit rushed. Please do not pair Nunnally or Euphemia with anyone other than Lelouch that's all I ask.
mfmxxx chapter 1 . 5/23/2014
Except Nunnally wasnt there. ;)
RCPMione chapter 6 . 12/12/2013
well I hope you get your second wind for this. I'll look forward to when you do. I particular would like to see Kallen and Lelouch behavior in this world, what amount of change would this bring.
Destrark chapter 6 . 11/22/2013
well, at least you'll return to it, so good for you.
KingChaot1c chapter 6 . 10/19/2013
I like what you have done with this story so far and hope that you continue it
Pandas Are Still Bears RAWR chapter 6 . 8/22/2013
Well that's a pity. It was going so well, I think that you were doing a wonderful job at keeping it cannon and smooth. (Although I did spot some spelling mistakes)

Hope you will come back to this, would really love to see this continue :3
RadioactiveCatMeow chapter 6 . 8/19/2013
Nice and interesting story. I can't wait to read more.
Dp11 chapter 2 . 6/15/2013
well this is cool and ya Marianne was crazy.
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