|Reviews for Jet Set Generations|
| Apollo the Akita chapter 15 . 6/24/2013
Woohoo! A good end for a good fanfic! :)
| Jack chapter 14 . 6/1/2013
The plot to this is a good one but you need to elaborate on your work. Your characterization and plot development are minimal at this stage and you have a habit of repeating yourself. There are some parts of this that you need to read aloud to yourself to fix the word choice and sentence structure, but apart from that it was an enjoyable read.
My final recommendation is a final chapter. You have ended at the climax of your story, you need at least one chapter to wrap up the plot to conclude in a way that is satisfying to the reader.
| Apollo the Akita chapter 11 . 12/17/2012
Wow, its already the end, i am gonna miss this fanfic!
| Apollo the Akita chapter 7 . 11/6/2012
Haha after saving the day from the bad guys, sure still wants a pizza! XD
| Apollo the Akita chapter 6 . 11/5/2012
Ooooo a new JSRF fic! I love it! I love how the Dreamerz are picking up what the GGs started... I just wish the Rokkaku Police would crawl in a hole and die lol... I wish for you to continue