|Reviews for Betrayal|
| Martin chapter 3 . 3/19/2013
Excellent tale, dark and ominous. I am very glad you stayed the course, instead of fading into a Disney ending, which so many others have done. I like that this story reads as an alternate outcome of the scene we saw onscreen.
| Kieranfoy chapter 3 . 11/2/2008
Nice. I wish Dark Willow had won, though.
On another note, love the term Dalorian Necromancer. What's the derivation?
| sibling chapter 3 . 8/14/2002
A dark fic, but very fine work. *sigh* Every story of yours I read, I get more and more jealous. Fellow writers, we are in the presence of greatness!
| RobC chapter 3 . 8/14/2002
Excellent part, very powerful.
| RobC chapter 2 . 7/21/2002
Darker than most of your stories, but excellent as always.