|Reviews for Home Is Wherever You Are|
| Urbane Sombrero chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
I like this story. The Riou-Eilie dynamic always interested me, and I thought it had the potential to be developed a bit more, so I'm glad that you decided to expand on it here. War-torn romance...always great drama. Great work! :)
| Legendary Biologist chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
Hmm... OOC? Not quite, Eilie is rather short-tempered in the game IMO. Ahaha, I feel that Eilie sounds jealous with Riou choosing Valeria and Anita instead of Nanami and her! Ah, Viktor misunderstood Eilie, which made me laughed aloud! It ends pretty sweetly, especially this line: Home is wherever you are.
Now for the concrit, there are some typos (spellings, capitalizations, and punctuations) in the story, but they can be easily corrected with a reread. Also, I have a comment about using numbers in a short story. Numbers are better spelled out, or else they will look quite jarring, such as this one:
the last (three) magic words.
Overall, the warm atmosphere of this story made me smile. :)