|Reviews for The Devil You Know|
| withloveviv chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
Nice! I'm happy with the ending:) I hate third person but it's October so I wanna read horror story this whole month...I'm glad I gave yours a try.
| CindyWindy chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
This was great - very creepy! I felt myself wanting to yell at her to quit overlooking all of the signs that James is obviously off his rocker.
I really enjoy third person and I like endings tied up fairly tight, though not to the point of tedium. :)
| 2old4fanfic chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
this reminded me a little of the Twilight Zone TV series, where everything looks fine at the start, but by the end they've all gone to hell
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
I know this is not what you had in mind but I have a few questions,first what the hell was wrong with james? was he the one doing those weird things to her? what happened to Charley? and why the hell did Edward have red eyes? other that the stry was weird but I guess it was meant to be
| sujari6 chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
Probably first person with alternating POVs. Loved this but would like to know a bit more about James, Charlie and what happened to Bella.
| Capricorn75 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
I think I'd have to choose the same option as Bella. Damn, James was definitely fucked up!
| sillyvamp chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
Geez, this ending is so ambiguous. I hope the Cullens didn't hurt Charlie. I'm glad that James has been dispatched. The future could be terrible for Bella or wonderful.
| cbcullen7 chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
| Lilith Leazman chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
This was a lovely little one-shot.
I kinda enjoyed the mystery of it all, but I'll admit I'd love a little more. _
Have a great Halloween!
| Jwo38 chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
Thank you for the Halloween treat!
| heygirl18 chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
Damn - James was more whacko than usual. Loved it!
In answer to your questions...
1. I don't have a preference, just that it's well written (as your stories are!).
2. I LOVE being left in the dark. There's a fine line between a bit of mystery and making no sense, but I'd prefer to be left thinking about the ending if I could.
Thanks for writing and sharing :)
| pennycocktail chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
First or third both work. I'm intrigued, so I want to read more. Thanks for writing.
| CassandraLowery chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
I liked the third person POV, and I liked the mystery at the end...although I would not be opposed to a sequel. ;)
Happy All-Hallowed Eve!
| NPakus chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
Thank you for sharing this dark tale. James was skin-crawling creepy. Left me with lots of questions!