Reviews for Barefoot in Texas
enka3 chapter 16 . 12/25/2012
Such a great and heartbreaking chapter!
Danielle85 chapter 16 . 12/25/2012
Merry Christmas! I have been failing at reviewing...but I am still reading because I am so hopelessly addicted to this story. Poor Edward. I envy Bella in this fic. She's very self-aware. They will find their way back to each other.
Guiltypleasure30plus chapter 16 . 12/25/2012
Will definitely be voting for you.

Can't wait for the next chapter in in his life. Wonder if Vickie will make a resurgence or if it will be purely a self-evolution.
CAngell chapter 16 . 12/25/2012
Oh my! I have read your story in one day...thanks to TLS! Keep writing, please! Can't wait to see how all this sorts out...Bella's last name definitely means something and Carlisle did something awful to Edward's GF. What happens next?
fanfictionalcolic chapter 16 . 12/25/2012
One of the most beautiful story ever.
Bises
distractedgirl25 chapter 16 . 12/25/2012
I just started this fic a few days ago...so glad i did. Thanks for making my Christmas a bit better, with the update...Hope your Christmas is special too.
modernsafari chapter 16 . 12/25/2012
*CRIES* she's leaving? I mean - I knew she was gonna ... but whyyyyyyy?

Merry day to you! xo
Rochelle Allison chapter 16 . 12/25/2012
aww. i think it's great that edward is so self aware, truly. part of me still feels like bella is running from stuff, though, too. that's ok though. they're both figuring things out...
i loved this chapter, even though it hurt.
xo
tehreem91 chapter 16 . 12/25/2012
This made me real sad :( I don't want her to leave but i guess this was coming and in a way its good. distance will make them realize what they want.
Loved the chapter!
Merry christmas and happy holidays 33
darylK chapter 16 . 12/25/2012
I don't want Bella to go but they both need time to figure their lives out
Merry Xmas! I hope you and your family have a wonderful holiday :)
KTNCullen chapter 16 . 12/25/2012
Oh, WOW... That was so completely heartbreaking...*sniffly sigh*...but I am glad they were so honest with each other. They really don't fit right now...but PLEASE I hope this is the impetus Edward needs to get his act together, and then GO. FIND. HER! Maybe they can keep in touch via texts or something. And I know there's more to her story there in Texas...
I originally snuck-read this last night on my phone in between church and the in-laws house, and then reread today only to find it just as sad and heartichokey as the first time. I really, REALLY hope these two can find their way back to each other and forge a life that will make them as happy as they deserve to be!
Thank you (?) for the chapter, as gut-wrenching as it was...
Wishing you peace and joy!
Katy
KatHat chapter 16 . 12/25/2012
Hey, PB!

Thanks for another tremendous chapter!

I'm not bummed because - you had us prepped for this and . . . they BOTH need to address some issues in their lives before making a commitment to each other. He has figured out what he DOESN'T want to be be, but now he needs to take that resolve and address the effed up situation that he has with his parents, and - figure out what he DOES want to do with his life. I think by now he should be able to realize Bella isn't out to manipulate him and break his heart to get some money and split. I think they pretty much have an understanding about what's happening. I mean, how long is this music show going to last anyway? It's only a temporary arrangement.

You STILL just keep dangling the carrot of the mystery surrounding Bella in front of us with only a tiny fraction of information. So . . . Renee's will? I'm still thinking Bella has money and wonder who the hell her father is! She has her own issues to resolve and I think Edward hit the nail on the head when he challenged her with this: "You seem to do an awful lot of running yourself Bella. Tell me, what are you running from? Hmm? What's with this weird wandering lifestyle of yours anyway? What is stopping you from staying in one place?" Yeah, she needs to figure it out!

Thanks for all this, and Merry Christmas to you and yours!

Kat
Seagull83 chapter 16 . 12/25/2012
I think she needs to leave, for both their sakes. That way, I'm hoping, they will truly appreciate what they have and will be unable to be apart and will have to be together again later in the story.

I hope you have a very Merry Christmas xxx
Siobhan Whitlock chapter 16 . 12/25/2012
And with that, my heart shatters and falls to the ground... trailing her tears.

Excellent chapter, and I voted ;) You deserve it!
Me chapter 16 . 12/25/2012
Still lovely!
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