|Reviews for Barefoot in Texas|
| WiltshireGlo chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
I just know Carlisle approached Vickie, not the other way round, but Vickie accepted.
Eloise's revelations nearly made me cry. Carlisle telling his son he'd tell him what he was going to be and Edward never asking for another cape was soul destroying. I'm glad Bella wasn't available, it gave him headspace - staring into space and trying to make sense of it, but i had to reread this sentence a few times "But I know what I did, and to me, it was significant. I decide to stop thinking about what to do, who to tell, and the proper way to let everyone down. With a letter? An email? Carrier pigeon? Fuck it." ..."and the proper way to let everyone down" he's going to do it. Decision made. Amazing. But then, you throw in Bella...and I just know she's got some revelations of her own. It's got to be in relation to her parentage - and political links.
As you can tell, I'm still loving it! ...and I see you have more than 1,000 reviews! Well deserved!
| Louie chapter 14 . 12/20/2012
Memories and scenes from a lifetime ago wash over me, but I continue to play, for Bella, who's swaying back in forth in front of me, her eyes never closing.
Hi, I think this was overlooked. Other than that I love the story. Love it love it!
| licpa chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
Another great chapter. I was so excited that I got an update right after I caught up. I had been thinking about the story all morning.
I love the sweet relationship between Edward and Eloise. It's so sad that he didn't get the same emotional care and support from his parents that he got from his nanny.
I am worried that Bella is going to run away to avoid more hurt just when Edward is starting to admit how strong his feelings are for Bella.
Thanks for sharing.
| michangelina chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
Oh no! I have a bad feeling about this.. Excellent chapter as always! I'm frigging addicted to this story. I can't wait for another update.. Which I have to hope it's soon. Because I just can't wait to see what happens next! U totally rock girl!
| MsLiss chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
i hope edward can be brave in regards to bella
| midsouthmama chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
Good for Edward. I can't wait for him to confront/stand up to his Dad. Still worried about that other shoe...
| CarrieZM chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
Uh oh ...a cliffie ! I'm thinking maybe Bella is leaving ? I absolutely adore this story 3
| tsm0836 chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
Edward has been conditioned all his life to be something that fits into something he isn't. It would take a lot of energy and bravery to break from this expected mould. I wonder if there is more to the story about Vicky. If it would be worthwhile finding her and asking different questions. Thank you for sharing your words, this is a great read,
| PurpleBoss chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
I just adore your Bella, so free spirited. She has "I don't give a shit" attitude and I love it!
I am so glad Edward seems to have finally grown a pair, although he is going to have a tough time with his parents when they find out!
I wonder what's on her mind, to be just "fine"
I have loads of theories about your story and I can't wait to see if any of them are right xxxx
| roxiegirl chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
Yes Edward! fist pump! He wants to work for the other side! I think he's figuring it out. Now, what's up with Bella? Can't wait for more of this amazing fic!
| Heather-Morgan chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
My first comment here. Im a quiet reader. I have enjoyed this story in my quiet corner. Am I the only one frustrated with Edward now?
Boy, you will get hurt in life probably more than once and most probably more than 1 girl.
Get the fuck over it you grown up child! Get over the bitch V and the asshole daddy C.
"I wasn't dumb enough to think that she might not have left anyway; you can't just come up with those hateful things if you didn't feel a twinge of them in the first place, I had to assume she meant some of what she said".
Well said boy, so why the fuck are you stuck in that hurt an memories for years? This should have been enough to forget about that bitch in the next right second and not shrink from fear and hurt, because the way she crushed your dreams and hurt your love overshadows every good memory you might have with her. You have to be thankful she left you sooner than later when you might have given up a lot more for her. She gave you permanenet stupidity it seems.
"A father though, who is supposed to love his son, played a huge part in crushing me. Instead of telling me that she came to him, which probably would've made me at least start to reconsider the type of person she was and my love for her, he let her flatten me."
Oh come on boy, what daddy told you a month later? you would have found out eventually. Reconsider what your love for her and her personallity? She hurt you, insulted you, left you broken. That should have been enough for you to reconsider. Money was the last blow. It took you 5 years to analyze the whole thing and see with clarity? OK. I hope you got the balls from now on, you will need an iron pair at that.
Cant wait what Bella will say to him. She will leave. She is a smart girl. Edward should love himseld first, he is not ready to love Bella the way she deserves.
having said that, gimme more...
| littlelizruth chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
Oh. This is going to be good. Edward vs his dad. Does he have the balls to follow through? I wonder where Bella went. To see her "dad".
| tehreem91 chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
Uh oh! what's up with bella?
glad that edward is finally taking control of his life!
anxiously waiting for the next update!
| rn aggie chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
oh snap. more angst might just break my heart. I think I wanna junk punch daddy dearest.
| TitaRitter chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
I love your story! And I'll hlp you get the 1,000 reviews!