Reviews for Barefoot in Texas
CarrieZM chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
Uh oh ...a cliffie ! I'm thinking maybe Bella is leaving ? I absolutely adore this story 3
tsm0836 chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
Edward has been conditioned all his life to be something that fits into something he isn't. It would take a lot of energy and bravery to break from this expected mould. I wonder if there is more to the story about Vicky. If it would be worthwhile finding her and asking different questions. Thank you for sharing your words, this is a great read,
PurpleBoss chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
I just adore your Bella, so free spirited. She has "I don't give a shit" attitude and I love it!

I am so glad Edward seems to have finally grown a pair, although he is going to have a tough time with his parents when they find out!

I wonder what's on her mind, to be just "fine"

I have loads of theories about your story and I can't wait to see if any of them are right xxxx
roxiegirl chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
Yes Edward! fist pump! He wants to work for the other side! I think he's figuring it out. Now, what's up with Bella? Can't wait for more of this amazing fic!
Heather-Morgan chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
My first comment here. Im a quiet reader. I have enjoyed this story in my quiet corner. Am I the only one frustrated with Edward now?
Boy, you will get hurt in life probably more than once and most probably more than 1 girl.
Get the fuck over it you grown up child! Get over the bitch V and the asshole daddy C.

"I wasn't dumb enough to think that she might not have left anyway; you can't just come up with those hateful things if you didn't feel a twinge of them in the first place, I had to assume she meant some of what she said".
Well said boy, so why the fuck are you stuck in that hurt an memories for years? This should have been enough to forget about that bitch in the next right second and not shrink from fear and hurt, because the way she crushed your dreams and hurt your love overshadows every good memory you might have with her. You have to be thankful she left you sooner than later when you might have given up a lot more for her. She gave you permanenet stupidity it seems.

"A father though, who is supposed to love his son, played a huge part in crushing me. Instead of telling me that she came to him, which probably would've made me at least start to reconsider the type of person she was and my love for her, he let her flatten me."

Oh come on boy, what daddy told you a month later? you would have found out eventually. Reconsider what your love for her and her personallity? She hurt you, insulted you, left you broken. That should have been enough for you to reconsider. Money was the last blow. It took you 5 years to analyze the whole thing and see with clarity? OK. I hope you got the balls from now on, you will need an iron pair at that.

Cant wait what Bella will say to him. She will leave. She is a smart girl. Edward should love himseld first, he is not ready to love Bella the way she deserves.

having said that, gimme more...

littlelizruth chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
Oh. This is going to be good. Edward vs his dad. Does he have the balls to follow through? I wonder where Bella went. To see her "dad".
tehreem91 chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
Uh oh! what's up with bella?
glad that edward is finally taking control of his life!
anxiously waiting for the next update!
rn aggie chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
oh snap. more angst might just break my heart. I think I wanna junk punch daddy dearest.
TitaRitter chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
I love your story! And I'll hlp you get the 1,000 reviews!
SunflowerFran chapter 14 . 12/20/2012
I had a bad feeling before when Bella talked about her missing father...I was hoping against hope it wasn't Carlisle...and I still am.
Maybe their reaction was because it was someone they know or knew. Maybe she is actually some sort of daughter of someone who they think WOULD be suitable for Edward...
ANd I think Rosalie is going to help Bella...
Dumaurier chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
I want him to just leave everything behind for her but I'm afraid Bella won't let him. I love this story so far!
blueeyes11354 chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
How sad to be told what you should be instead of figuring it out for yourself. Takes some of the fun out of life.
SunflowerFran chapter 13 . 12/20/2012
Oh, wow...he is going to go play...
Guest chapter 2 . 12/20/2012
Ok totally wondering what is up with Bella. Looking forward to reading more. :)
twifan20 chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
Oh, oh! That didn't sound good! Now, I get to bore you with my theories (sorry in advance ;)). I'm guessing it's one of two things that happened with Bella to make her distance herself from Edward. 1) His dad went to her to get her out of the picture... or Bella could have went to him with the same outcome. or 2) Bella felt like she was being treated by Edward the way her father treated her mother and decided she didn't want a broken heart.

Can't wait for more! (as always. lol).
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