Reviews for My Adventure Begins
Sketchy Smeargle chapter 4 . 2/19/2013
Cool story, I'll put this on my alerts so I can keep up with Grimm, Tina, and, Sting's adventure! XD
MisterBland1 chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
I like the use of specifics places and names, which helps set your character into a pertinent place in the pokemon world. I also think that the method your character obtains their first pokemon is fairly unique, and might help set up a complex relationship between the trainer and pokemon.

As a small tip- I'm not too good at this, but it never hurts to suggest- try to keep relevant information tightly clustered together. Like in the beginning, when you mention the voltorb machine, try reconstructing the narrative so that comes closer to the scene where you are actually playing the game.