|Reviews for Fifty Shades: Broken Hearted
| Helen of Troy chapter 1 . 2/17
I just don't understand how Ana could be so stupid is to take him back. It would have been one thing if it was a one night stand or one time occurrence but he had been f****** his sub for weeks before she caught him. And he obviously had no issues doing it while his wife was home and pregnant with his child. Ana's just too f****** stupid to put any faith and trust in him ever again. The best part of the story was when he had to watch and listen to Ana f****** another man and he could finally feel the pain of what he did to her. It would have been better if they would have divorced and he would have to sit back and see her with another man and see another man being Daddy to his kids. Typical cheat story. He cheats they separate he begs she takes him back they have another baby and live happily ever after. Boring and not very original. Yawn.
| vickiel2r chapter 92 . 1/15
Have to check if I ever started the sequel. Thanks theough I am so late with this.
| vickiel2r chapter 91 . 1/15
More revelations to how and why happened.
| vickiel2r chapter 90 . 1/15
The family worth fighting for to have forever their lives.
| vickiel2r chapter 89 . 1/15
They have to make the most of their free time for themselves.
| vickiel2r chapter 88 . 1/15
Christian drained the milk and no reserve left for Matty, so hope he sleeps all night before his next feeding. Ana had a sense to rejuvenate the needs after Christian had been working overtime at the office that had kept him missing time with Ana and the children too.
| vickiel2r chapter 87 . 1/15
Plenty of family time loaded with puppies. Children will have responsibilities now.
| vickiel2r chapter 86 . 1/15
A family affair when a child is hospitalized no matter how mild the condition and Gracie is a brave fun girl.
| Maria chapter 18 . 10/19/2023
Yep. Christian deserves every bit of agony he's feeling right now. I wish Ana would just move on with this guy but of course it's not going to happen... She'll be weak and spineless and take the cheating a****** back just like every other story out there.
| Guest chapter 43 . 9/29/2023
| vdlucas chapter 19 . 7/28/2023
Ignore the trolls. You write whatever your heart and head desires
| Guest chapter 17 . 6/23/2023
I like your writing, but I don't like the cheating and moving on...I want Ana and Christian to go to counseling and get back together,,,,I think Christian needs to seriously do some soul searching about what his problems are that he cheated...I don't like cheating stories! I think this totally goes against the original characters ...I know Christian has serious emotional baggage...from childhood and especially Elena's pedophillia..abuse of him...he really needs to man up and look himself in the mirror... Like I said your writing is good but I don't like your story...I won't be reading the rest of it...I don't want them to move on...I want them to work it out!
| Patricia Self chapter 85 . 6/4/2023
This is so sad how they both want to be in surgery with her but only 1 can go .
| Patricia Self chapter 84 . 6/4/2023
They are getting to it pretty fast after having their baby.
| Patricia Self chapter 82 . 6/4/2023
Poor little Liv, she is a little bit jealous of her new baby brother!