I love your story and that’s the secon time I am reading it
Don’t worry about the other
If they got any manners they would not say things like that they not worth thinking about
If he or she don’t like the story
Go read something else nobody’s asking you to read this one

I hate what Cristian did
But I love the story

Bravo

hahahahahahahaah...Christian is lucky to be alive after that statement
Amazing Chapter...hahahahahahaahaHah

I don't think I can read any more... This is just absolutely horrible... CG was cheating for MONTHS ! The fuker should go die... Ana is so weak for taking him back, .. such men never change no matter how much you wish... The bastard will cheat again

Ana has every right to bring up the affair at any time, it was not uncalled for... And she'll be absolutely right on doubting CG at every turn cause he has proven to be untrustworthy and a cheating bastard ... He truly does not deserve Ana.. she should have moved on with another man, watching her happy and live her life with another man would have been his true punishment

Eww he's touching her with the same hands that were just pleasuring another woman and she's letting him... Again same weak ass Ana who'll fall for the bastard's fake tears and apology.. where can I find sorry with strong fl who actually had guts to move on and have hea with someone else

this bitch is crazy she dont think Christian Grey wouldn't get a blood test.

This had potential to be a good story but like everybody else you had to make Ana weak and stupid and take the a****** back. The best part of the story was when he had to watch her through the window being with another man. He just needed to spend the rest of his life seeing her with another man and that would have been his punishment

I read this story years ago, i thought by this chapter he had flash back of how he started with Allyson.

God he is a pig. What a fucking asshole. He should stick a gun in his mouth and pull the trigger.

Can’t wait for the sequel

Is the nurse gonna embarrass herself in front of Ana over Mr. Grey.

I believe that it’s Allyson!

Love that after what all happened to them they are still together!