Reviews for Fifty Shades: Broken Hearted |
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![]() ![]() You should stop worrying about the evil hateful trolls out there because they are jealous that they don’t have any talent to do what you keep writing what you want and we fans will love it! |
![]() ![]() When your heart is broken it is so easy to want to get rid of the pain because that is what I almost did when I lost 2 of my children, it’s a horrible thing to do but sometimes it happens when your heart broken! |
![]() ![]() It’s so good to see a man not afraid to cry and show his feeling To his wife that are deep inside of him And beg for forgiveness! |
![]() ![]() Put them back together! |
![]() ![]() I didn’t think I could cry this much, it’s almost like losing someone in your family . That’s how much it hurts! |
![]() ![]() Make him suffer for awhile but put them back together soon! |
![]() ![]() He should destroy he should suffer for a while! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i don't think it weird at all it draws some couples closer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yes she need to go to jail for 25 to 30 years for what she done to Ana and Olivia she a horrible person that needs jail not a mental hospital or a nice little jail where she can just walk away |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my goodness this was such a heart breaking chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that's really moving fast for an actual first date |
![]() ![]() ![]() i have read this so where maybe wattpad i like the story but i hate that Ana slept with this guy and she would never do that especially with her and Christian still being married. |
![]() ![]() This was a long story but I realized because there were a lot of short chapters in the beginning. I think Ana forgave Christian quickly even though I like HEA, I think Ana should have held out a little longer and made him squirm, beg more for her forgiveness. The whole situation with Dr Richard was ok but I felt sorry for him - looks like he was used (rebound for Ana). Its sad that he now has this child that he adopted because his ex is crazy and the donor has features of the husband to wife he was sleeping with and is in love with. LOL. Funny the child name is Oliver and the child that Ana was pregnant with during affair is Olivia. I felt sorry for Richard on vacation with Oliver on beach alone. It would have been nice to see him find someone in the end. the whole attack with Allyson was awful - its always Ana that gets attacked by his exes never him. But I am glad you gave us a little of her recovery and did not dwell too much as other authors have in their stories. I did feel sorry for Allyson - she too was used - by Christian and once he was caught he dumped her like a piece of garbage. She was good enough to have sex with for those months, I hate when he is done with his subs he discards them so roughly. And then she was used by Elena. She was on the right path with Richard in their marriage but I think from what I read she wanted more of the kink and was cheating on him. Sounds like in the end, she misses the baby and Richard and wants them safe but too late for reconcile what she did was unforgivable. The kids: Ted is great throughout, Gracie - not sure why she was called Gracie in the story when her first name was Phoebe, Olivia - poor thing she was born during an affair and then involved in an attack on her mother due to that affair, Matthew - well he is the child that rounded out the whole starting over with A&C. I do want to say that Olivia could have been spared that whole kidnapping had Ana kept her home. That was stupid on Ana's part to drag her along from the party (her birthday party) to go shopping for her cake. She should have left her home with Christian while her and Luke went out. I blame Ana for the issues Olivia was having (with separation anxiety) not blaming Allyson. She was a newborn for crying out loud - she should have left her home, period. All in all good story, there is mention of things we were going to see play out but I guess that will be in a follow up story (sequel) but from what I see that story looks abandoned at Chapter 4. |
![]() ![]() I love your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am glad you allowed AS to have a lover, I hope CG peaked in the window an witness this, so now he can under stand how his wife felt. |