Ok, I get the dirty talk and how it can be a turn on, but no woman wants to be called a dirty whore, that's just going to far. Sorry. But that needs to be dialed back, it's crude offensive and I doubt any wife and mother would truly be ok having a lover say them to her, especially when there is a history of self esteem issues. I give lots of creative license to authors as I read but this was too much. It's too out of character even for the versions of A&C that you created. I have enjoyed this story but it seems like you are just prolonging it do youbcan write more sex scenes and are devaluing the story you already created.

One of the best stories ever!

One of the best love scenes ever,you should take a bow!

I think it was very intimate and very beautiful, what goes on between a couple is their business only!

They love each other so much!

I think it’s fine as long as they both agree on it !

It was a great process of childbirth and very well done!

Maybe just a little angst for good measure and then their happily ever after!

I hope she has an easy labor!

Good chapter, I thought maybe Lacy might be having an attraction for Christain because she seemed to interested in Christain by staring at him a lot!

I have a feeling that Lucy is going to cause some trouble for the Greys!

Sorry but I think Christian had a right to be pissed at Richard, why is Ana so protective of Richards feelings?

He should definitely tell her and let her make up her own mind about seeing Allyson!

You write the best romantic scenes

This was heartbreaking