| Reviews for Fifty Shades: Broken Hearted |
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  Guest chapter 66 . 8/7/2022 "I'm sorry for what she done" Good grief! It's "I'm sorry for what she DID." "Done" is used only with a helping verb! |
| Guest chapter 28 . 8/5/2022 GAH! It's "you've GONE," not "you've WENT." Conjugation matters. (And it's still not "mines.") |
| Guest chapter 15 . 8/4/2022 Gah! It's not MINES; it's MINE! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/28/2022 Really wanted Ana to divorce CG and end up with the doctor...typical story...she was strong fir a little while but you turned her into a doormat...like all stories do. |
 Pleasingjennifer chapter 91 . 7/9/2022 Wonderfully out standing I love to read your next book ! Thank you for how you create A great story |
| PleasingJenny chapter 87 . 7/9/2022 What is good for the goose is good for the gander! If he can take Ana's butt well then she CAN take his as well with the same size tool he has! Aka strap on ! Fair is fair , wright ? |
| Pleasingjennifer chapter 86 . 7/9/2022 Just perfect ! Just right ! |
| Pleasingjennifer chapter 85 . 7/9/2022 Any one who has had one knows its PAIN FULL ! I was lucky mine didn't burst but the ride to the hospital was bumpy ... Very nice chapter |
| Pleasingjennifer chapter 82 . 7/8/2022 Liv has had the run of the house and of her parents . She needs a little little tough love and to grow up Or the Grey will have a tougher Mia on there hands |
| Pleasingjennifer chapter 81 . 7/8/2022 Olivia will be like Renaud's wrap ! |
| Pleasingjennifer chapter 80 . 7/8/2022 The chapter was GREAT and thank you for your details ! Now its time for someone to get the SNIP SNIP ! Four is enough ! |
| PleasingJenny chapter 74 . 7/7/2022 I don't blame Ana ! Christian needs to be taught A on going LESSON ! I'd ask to go back to Seattle ! Drop the Cave man crap ... |
| PleasingJenny chapter 72 . 7/7/2022 Wonderful chapter well. Dam good ! |
| PleasingJenny chapter 71 . 7/7/2022 The bitch gets no visits ,let her rot ! |
| PleasingJenny chapter 70 . 7/7/2022 I know the "itch " Should see A nut house ! But she new what she was doing ! ! They should let the women take care of her in prison ! |