Reviews for Whemmle
tangled6 chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
I love the twist you took on this! I have read Labyrinth FF on and off for several years now, but I must say, this is the first time I've read one where Sarah becomes a goblin. The summary was enticing but didn't give it away, which made the storyline an interesting but delightful shock. I think you really nailed Jareth's character here at the time of her capture in the oubliette-the hinted interest, just a peek of the start of an attraction, but denying it all due to the hatred he has for her for being the runner. Thanks for sharing!
FelineGrace chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
Lylabeth 1 chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
I'm sorry, good writing, but I just am not fond of the plot. You are brave to up it up here. Some will, undoubtly, love its twist and turns.