Reviews for The Untold Romance of Fire Dancer and Cat
Smurf chapter 1 . 8/16/2016
I must say I was rather disappointed by the absence of Cat's street slang, along with the fact that she called Dancer by his name rather than the term "copperhead" which she continued to use well into their relationship.
Arthur Pemberton chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
I really liked it. The thing that stuck out the most for me was when you said 'guy'
In a few parts of the story. The older feel of the seven realms is rather disrupted
By some of the modern speech. Still great!
moonwolf0898 chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
wood keep it coming
Rainbows-and-Rainclouds chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
I really like this so far! I love your writing style, and the characters seem very close to canon. The only thing I can say, is I have always thought Dancer would talk a bit more formally, but that's just my interpretation. It's very nice, though, and I definitely can't wait to see more.