Reviews for In His Head - Bad Wolf Bay
peanutbuttre7 chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
I was so sad at that part. After it blinked it you could see him going I lo- I lo- but couldn't finish it, like it was too painful for him.

-Alle
chocolaty chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
*sobbing madly*
You broke my heart, AGAIN.
But i knew you would since it is about doomsday...
It is really good.
IzzyPure chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
*sobbing* I-I hate you! WHY MUST YOU DO THIS TO ME?!

*curls in ball whimpering* Oh, the feels, the feels, the feels...
Guest chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
so sad!
Accio Insanity chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
Nice :)
Isis-Rose Moon chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
OMG
Two words: I cried
Issie
ThisIsALegitUsername chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
Oh my freaking god...
This was horribly sad! This scene was already bad enough, but this made it ten times more sad!
Either way, great job. This is totally what was going through his mind at the moment, it was very in-character. Just an area you might think about fixing is putting quotes on the diolauge and/or italics on the thoughts. I am reading this on my phone, so it might be that way already. Sorry if it is!
Overall, excellent work making me cry. I'll go to bed now.
PS The unisex pills...HILARIOUS!
ToTheStarsAndBack chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
Wonderfully Sad :*)