|Reviews for The List|
| Avid Reader chapter 18 . 6/15
Great writing I literally started crying before I got to the end of this chapter, that's good writing when you can make people feel strong emotions with just words on a page:)
| the-cari-moose chapter 1 . 6/1
I'm assuming there's going to be some kind of threesome in here isn't there? Both Harry and Hermione will end up dating Draco.
| Guest chapter 28 . 5/10
Ah that's unfair...it could have being more interesting if Draco too joined them...foursome that's the fic, y only harry had all the fun...
| flowerchild33 chapter 28 . 5/4
Definitely Epilogue 2
| 19Shorty chapter 28 . 4/12
love the story very funny and its very sweet and touching also the drama was out of sight so great story i loved every bit of it
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/27
That Hermione agreed to break up with Ron should be a big hint to her that she is not really that attached to him. Who would agree to break up with someone just because their parents say so, teenager or not? It's obvious that Hermione and Ron don't belong together. And don't start with that "bickering like an old couple", who should file a divorce or better yet shouldn't have married. The only plausible reason Hermione would go for Ron is if she thinks nobody else would want her. I don't know why Rowling would put Hermione together with Ron, she admitted that it was for personal reasons and didn't really fit the story. Maybe Rowling made the same mistake, but she at least got her divorce. Hermione is still with Ron 19 years later.
Harry and Ginny is also wrong, just not as much. That is because we don't know so much about Ginny. But we know that she loves him because he has to face Voldemort. So she is still after her Boy-Who-Lived, not Harry.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/17
Most progressive Mum ever...
| jennyfur88 chapter 28 . 1/12
I loved this story. And I love the orginal ending although I thought the were all together until hermione said daph left them for another man.
| twinningbigtime chapter 1 . 1/8
It started out as a great story. I really loved the idea of the list! The more I kept reading the more I got frustrated. Panicking hermione? Ron to the rescue? Harry being a jealous ass but screwing 2 people? Where was Blaise's date? At the start you had him built up into the story but then he was gone! Then the ending OMG! If he picked Hermione then it should have just ended with him and her! None of the black potter crap. And definitely not some sort of messed up triad.
Anyways that's just my opinion. As I said I loved the starting idea.
| Guest chapter 28 . 10/17/2015
Disappointed because you only tagged the characters Draco and Hermione in this implying it's a Dramione story but it wasn't. You need to change that is misleading and annoying.
| potterhead54targaryen chapter 28 . 9/7/2015
I am confused... Who did Dapne marry? I mean in cho 27
| Trebores1 chapter 28 . 5/21/2015
This is the better ending. Thank you for writing it.
| Guest chapter 28 . 4/14/2015
I loved the sex scenes, but the character development wasn't that good. It was very much like porn: only the sex, withiout substance.
I dislike that Neville was a kind of vilain, but the worst is that it was just abandoned. What happened to make him like that? Why someone didn't talk to him about it? Not fight and yell, but a real talk. And what happened to him?
I'm not a big fan of Hermione, nor I think that Emma Watson is hot. So everyone interessed in her was unbeliaveble to me.
I Love Daphne and read this story because of her. I prefer the first epilogue, because she deserve best than Harry and Hermione. She should end all with Harry after he rejected her and slept with Hermione, even with the scene in the Slytherin room.
I don't really understand Draco appeal, but the threesome was hot. I was surprised that I liked it, as I think male/male eww.
Why we didn't know anything about the others? So much story that could have happened and was ignored...
| Lily chapter 28 . 4/5/2015
Hey, loved your story! Love the alternate ending. To me it seemed more realistic, because Daphne leaving them didn't make sense- they had a close bond. I also like that the two girls grew closer over time. Thanks for sharing this amazing story with us :) x
| Zippytickles chapter 28 . 3/31/2015
Loved this fic so much! Definitely prefer the alternative epilogue. Thanks for writing!