Reviews for Bend Around the Wind |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i think ANY rich person would pay a fortune for this xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() great new chapter. keep going please. |
![]() ![]() ¡Me dejas en suspenso! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha, I definitely agree on the Hollywood thing! He'd get rich within a day, guaranteed. :P well, now Tony is gifted with All-Speak (he'll never shut up now!) ;D Now how long will it take for him to grasp the magic and use it to understand/speak? well, more bonding time for Loki and Tony! :D Can't wait for the next chapter! :) |
![]() ![]() Oh shit! Tony! :o Ehhehehe...now Loki will have to 'nurse him to health' lol. :3 I would love to see some fluff. Just a bit. :P Oh and yeah... love your story. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Oh, if they got attacked right now, they would die a horrible death." Great one xD Thanks for this chapter ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() when Tony comes back i hope that he tells everyone what that elixer did to him cause all the woman would try to jump Loki in order to get it no matter the risk also love that tony's so persistent about the All-Speak |
![]() ![]() ![]() pleasee continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() My sis was so happy to see that Tony got de-aged slightly. Best part was that you were able to fit it into your story. It's also good since Tony isn't a relatively young man and we have no idea how long this trip will be. I liked the little awkward moments Tony and Loki had. "Your fingers are cold." Lok moves his hands away. "No, um… it made it better… the cotton situation in my head I mean." Loki did not reply to that. I love this story, it's not complete bulllshit like everything else on here. |
![]() ![]() Hello Scyllaya! Love your story. You keep your time developing the characters and their relationship, but you also keep up a high pace where chapter upload is concerned. You got a loyal reader in me now. One thing that really fascinates me: You're trying to show Loki and Tony as equals as well as two completely different persons. The human nerd-genius and the magic-wielding god. And it's working and believable! Each of them has strengths. They have to work as a team. Clever idea ;) A creative objection however: While describing human (or rather the clever Tony Stark's) intelligence you put it not far away from that of (Demi-)Gods. Compared with the common Asgardian/Aesir that is indeed true. In the Marvel Universe Loki learned a completely foreign and difficult language on one evening. And this brilliant mindset of Loki is somehow missing here. Oh, and by the way: Loki is a God of Fire after defeating Logi, the personification of fire, in contest (what you inserted as "not his kind of magic" or something like that); he is the warming crackling hearth fire that keeps up the spirits in good times (with mischief and wit, what else) and the uncontrolled manic fire in bad times. An ice-giant spouse as well as a god of fire, that also confirms his ambivalent nature. *know-it-all-mode ending* (sorry) The latter was also very well shown in your last chapters ;) Keep up the good work! ScarLip |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have no idea how glad I am that I did not have to stay at that cliff hanger. I think I would have gone into panic mode, and that's never fun. Good job! I love the creativity, lovely as always |
![]() ![]() ![]() love that Loki was able to save Tony with that awesome elixer and Tony's right his liver is gonna love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just found this story. It's great, so I followed :} |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good chapter as always. Really looking forward to your next one ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fic is my favorite! I love this love-hate relationship between Loki and Tony because there is love even if Loki doesn't want to admit it! I don't speak english very well but I'm trying my best to read you fic and leave you a review! Thank you for you quickly update! keep going! |