Reviews for Bend Around the Wind |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nice! sly, flying creatures that want to kill them and steal their stuff. It IS a cliche but an important one and very well set up too. I like that Loki can't fly, it keeps him from being all powerful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh, I suspected Tam and Firefly right away but Loki would be the Captain and...well he's close actually but that makes Stark who? Adara? |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm, so the Bee could be a flying purple people eater? If she wanted to. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loki's right, Stark jinxed it. ") |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was kind of wondering if Loki's elixir healed Tony's need for an arc reactor... but it looks like not. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Tony and Potts "/ but Tony is getting so much tech here! Thanks again for enough explanation to make the magic believable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Liked the linguistics rundown - too often stories simply bypass the logics or ignore how stuff works but scifi is supposed to be rational, at least on some universe, so thanks for taking the time to write it out. |
![]() ![]() Drongo and Bee 3 totally ship them! And I'm not ashamed of shipping Barton and Juyu, I just picture Juyu older.. *_* |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was epic (in multiple ways!). I enjoyed reading it so very much. The character development and such was breathtaking to see and the plot was great. I really fell in love with your Loki and tony and Bee and everyone else. It was very well done. The beginning was hard to read (so much sad!) but they got through it and grew so much. Thank you for writing such an amazing, long story. |
![]() ![]() i honest to god love you so much...you are such an amazing writer, this story has made me angry, tearful, embarressed, fearful and happy at all the right moments...if you ever aspire to be an author i feel that you would go far...keep writing for you have real talent... i wuv yoooou /cries/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh gosh this was amazing! The length was daunting but well worth it (even tho I took a break halfway through ;)) definitely one for the faves list! Thanks so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm almost 100% positive that I've reviewed before but whatever XD You wove a magical, epic and powerful storyline, everything was beautiful and it flowed perfectly. You transformed and molded the characters to fit your plot without making everything too sudden, rushed and OOC. You didn't mellow out Loki (like many people do) you kept him strong, opinionated and dangerous while revealing the softer affectionate side of him along with major factors in his past without spelling it out, you left certain things to the reader's interpretation and it made Bend Around the Wind even more powerful to read. Thank you for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mmmmm... Love this story! Thanks for your work |
![]() ![]() ![]() :3 Awesomeeeeeee :D I just love this story... I read it on another site first, I think. And then once again on this site. And now a third time! It's so good :D |
![]() ![]() I only have one word: Perfect! |