Wow. WOW WOW WOOOOOOW. This was great. I mean, I am at a loss of words. It was kind of daunting when I saw how many chapters this thing had but I'm so glad I started it and stuck through it. It took me maybe about a week to finish this? Between work, other things, and just unable to sit in front of a computer screen reading for that long, it took longer then I expect but god damn it was worth it.

I noticed a few spelling mistakes here and there but I'm sure this is on your bookshelf of done projects and really, they were rather few and far between. The only thing that really bothered me about this fic was the quotation marks when people were speaking. I'm not use to only one (ex: 'Hello' Tony spoke) and much more used to the more used method ("Hello" Tony Spoke) but I got used to it after a couple of chapters.

There were great story arcs and I'm glad things weren't just so easy for our heroes tbh and even though I figured this story had a happy ending (or something of the like) I couldn't help but sit in my seat and want to shake my screen and scream "What's going to happen next!?"

Another thing: Your characters, I absolutely love them. I love them so much that I wish I could see more of them. Like, I know this story was mostly about Tony and Loki, but it always made me so happy when your characters appeared. I can't decide who's my favorites, but it might be Hatchet because of that one scene where Tony and the crew meet him and are in the bar. And man, that insult: "Sine you like to use your mouth so much, why don't you come over here and suck my cock!" I freaking died at that. That was the moment where I decided I liked Hatchet because god damn, that is hilarious and I almost want to use that now in real life (never mind that I don't have one, but w/e)

But yeah, I loved all of this story and it was pleasure to read. It will probably be a story that I'll reread at some point in the future. I'm also gonna check out whatever else you've got bc I love your style and you've got a good sense of fighting scenes.

Thank you for such a wonderful story,

Inumaru12

At last! I'm so happy (ﾉ )ﾉ

Oh my lord. Thank you so much for this. I want to reread already. There were several points in the last few days where I got too excited and had to stop reading and calm down before continuing - like Tony's grand arrival back on Earth, and Little Bee's injury, and Loki's capture, and oh for god's sake there's too much to talk about. Maybe I'll go back through and review chapter by chapter and squee accordingly.
Some of the nicest most emotionally charged M scenes I've ever read.
You made me care about your original characters! I adore Juyu and Hatchet especially.
So yeah. I loved it. Thanks a lot!

Wouah! I loved it! Read it all in - almost - one go. This is simply wonderful and I hope there is a sequel. :)

What a great story. This is why i love this site because so many people have such a great imagination and you are exactly one of them. I loved how it wasnt rushed into things and how you put so much detail in each and every chapter. I enjoyed this story very much and i hope i find a story just as interesting as yours!

Tight knit family :)

Good progress.

I think it was SHEILD's doing.

They can't catch a break.

I just love new characters :)

God it's hard to read with tears in my eyes!

I like all the different perspectives.

My eyes got a bit glassy.

:)

Well done chapter.