Reviews for Sweeter Than Candy
Peaceful Dragon Rose chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
good story
ArlynG chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
So sweet... love it.
mdsngrc chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
This was so wonderfully sweet! I absolutely loved it. :)
romycullen chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
Oh my god I loved loved looooved this 3
2loveybunnies chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Aw, that was so sweet! Almost makes me want to get pregnant again just so I can come up with a cute way to tell my husband I'm pregnant! OK, now that I think about it...I'll just read this over and over again when baby fever strikes! Thanks for sharing this with us! Belated (like 3 months!) happy birthday to bornonhalloween!
NY13 chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
adorable - thank you
Pieshell chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
This was perfect and sweet just as the Title suggests. I thoroughly enjoyed this drama-free one-shot. Thanks for sharing.
kmfroggi chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
awwww! what a sweet romantic story! loved it!
MillieClann chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
Awwww, that was just adorable.
debslmac chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
:) loved this
Amber1983 chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
Oh this is absolutely PERFECT, MarLea! Seriously. I love the way you've structured it through the different Halloweens and it's the most wonderful combination of sweet and hot. A beautiful, self-contained tale, one of my fave one shots ever.

The t-shirt thing was ADORABLE! :)

And how hot was that lemon?! Woah! Especially this line which got me a little breathless - "Cum for me, baby," she whispers, "I want to feel you. I want your hot white cum inside me Edward." Good God!

Loved it, darlin'! x
Leslie E chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
Very good story!
bornonhalloween chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
Everyone knows Wonder Woman wants to be Superman's girlfriend.-I did not know that!

This is so adorable...loving it. Love the curling iron at his forehead.

It was made in the olden days so the movie was in black and white. -OMG, you're lucky I love you.

Yeah, she looks pretty cool. But I don't tell her. No way.-THIS is just perfection. YOu totally captured the different ages and the little boy feelings.

"B, to me, you'll always be the prettiest."-total shivers. What a beautiful moment. Sweet, sweet kiss. SWOON.

Oh man, this line: She pulls my hair, knowing I fucking love and hate it at the same time; it makes me want to do things to her that we know we just aren't ready for yet.-thank you for that. :)

WHAT A FANTASTIC PROPOSAL! SO Halloween and perfect!

AWWWW the ending. YOu perfected it with the final costume. Just so wonderful!

I'm gushing and chilling and thrilling. This is such a wonderful sweet one-shot, you just didn't miss a trick here. Thank you so much for this amazing birthday treat. Whatever I did to spur on your writing, it's all good!

Thank you again for this amazing gift, and the beautiful gift of your friendship.
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sarabear91 chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
LOVE! Great detail and story-telling!
Musiclover10000 chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
It is very differnt. My fav holiday is Halloween,but this story brings something out of the romance\lust\scary\sexy Halloween i was hoping for. Still pretty dam good.
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