|Reviews for breathing river water|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/18
Wow...I simply loved the story..you are soooo talented...Katie Cassidy and her blue eyes...they are to die for...She is so beautiful
| Lady NeverAfterNon chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
This was gorgeous. Thanks for posting!
| Ghostrider chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
Heartbreaking, is all I can say.
| Daddy's LiL HeartBreaker chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
Holy...don't mind me. Just crying. I just want to hug Ruby. I'll just keep reminding myself that Ruby does get the man. Haha. Anyway, we're okay over here. Sandy knocked out our power for five days, but we're okay now.
| Kathey27 chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
This... this was dark. Dark and powerful and heartbreaking and amazing and beautiful and oh god I can barely see the computer screen through the tears.
I LOVE DJINN STORIES SO FREAKING MUCH! THEY'RE ALWAYS SO HEARTBREAKING AND GORGEOUS AND ALWAYS LEAVE ME A PUDDLE OF TEARS SNOT AND REGRET!
This story was perfect. I know I say that a lot but it's true. That's the only word for it. It was raw and harsh and painful and half way through it my chest started to hurt and it took me a while to recognize the feeling. It was actual heartache. You made my heart literally hurt with this story and I can't even... I have no proper words for what this did to me.
Ruby... dear god... this girl is going to kill me. She wants too much and needs so much and deserves everything but keeps coming up with nothing. She fights so much and loves so much and in the end, what does she get? Nothing.
The format was beautiful, the quotes made me shiver and oh god.. you used 2nd person. THAT'S MY KRYPTONITE! I HAVE NO STRENGTH OR RESOLVE AGAINST 2ND PERSON! IT'S MY ONE TRUE WEAKNESS BESIDES CAS! HOW DID YOU KNOW?! I've always personally found it more personal and sincere than 1st person. 1st person has always seemed too choppy and awkward for me and I can never really get into it all that well. 2nd person is the best of them all. 3rd person is pretty great but yeah... 2nd person rocks and THANK YOU FOR USING IT.
All in all: Amazing, great, astonishing work and THIS IS WHY YOU'RE MY FAVORITE SUPERNATURAL WRITER (shhhh, don't tell the others!)
P.S. Sorry this took so long, I was too busy crying into my shirt sleeves so I had to stop every few minutes *angry glare* WHY DO YOU WRITE THINGS THAT HURT ME SO?!
P.P.S. Psst, guess what? Since, I think last May I've been procrastinating on a Djinn story but it's about Dean and it was in season 3 and the life he could have if he gave in and told Ruby his feelings and gaaah; what I'm trying to say here is that I think there is seriously like a Supernatural psychic link between us. THIS IS WHY WE ALWAYS HURT EACH OTHER SO MUCH!