Reviews for Through the Kitchen Window
blue022 chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Lovely.
HollBeth chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
This was...incredible. Beautiful and sad and hopeful...telling it the way you did, through Esme - brilliant. It lent a completely different layer of emotion to some serious drama/angst, equalizing at times, spiking or bottoming it out at others.

You have such an incredible gift with storytelling. I hope you do it always, and I hope we get to read. I thank you so much for sharing what you have...
The Love Peacock chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
This was really beautiful! I only wish I could have seen more Bella/Edward love as those two deserve each other so much! Xxx
modernsafari chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
So fantastic. Loved this from Esme's POV. Hearing mama's version made it all the more heartbreaking somehow. Because no matter how hard we try, we cannot protect our children from the heartache first love brings with it.
jkt7 chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
Loved it! I wish the first kiss would have been in Edward or Bella's POV, but otherwise it was great. Really sweet.
Parker137 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
I have two boys and thought about them while reading. My heart! A mother's perspective is so unique and unexpected. I absolutely loved it! You did more with a short story than some do with 40 chapters. The emotion was gripping. Thank you!
kantstopreading chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
This was really wonderful. It was great hearing this story from Esme's POV. A Mom's perspective - great idea.
obsessedwithedward1 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
Wow! This was so beautifully written and I am just sorry that it took me so long to get on board. I thank Nic ( fanfic whisperer) for alerting me to your wonderful story and I am so happy to hear that her birthday surprise will be shared by us all. Can't wait to read more of your beautiful words. Thank you so much.
XXX

(Flippy)
DontKnowWhatImDoing chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
If I could hug this one-shot, I would. It has everything a good story needs. I would love to read more of this characters, but this feels perfect just as it is. Beautiful.
sillyvamp chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
Lovely. Sad and sweet with a great full circle and HEA. :)
karolkid chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
Loved it!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
Such a wonderfully beautiful story. The POV was perfect for this story. Too bad it just took them so long to find their happiness, but they found it in the end.
WideForest3 chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
So beautiful to have Esme's POV. I read this with my two-month-old second-born sleeping in my arms. You captured a mother's thoughts so well. Esme's voice was so true here. It was nice to see the Edward-Bella drama from a different POV - one that had no real ulterior motive other than for her children to find happiness. Thank you.
divyvicki chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
What a great story. I really loved it.
blueeyes11354 chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
How wonderfully different to read a love story from a mother's perspective. Very well done.
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