Reviews for The Very First Time
HOTSHOT chapter 1 . 5/30
WOW MAN THAT WAS PRETTY GOOD MORE
The Warty Hogg chapter 1 . 4/28
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Guest chapter 1 . 4/24
That was an intense climaxed but was a very good fanfic
Good job keep up the good work plz thnz
HiccstridHaddock01 chapter 1 . 4/19
How old are they? Nice story by the way!
Crazyaniknowit chapter 1 . 3/27
Awesome job!
the reader chapter 1 . 3/22
excellent
Armybro37 chapter 1 . 1/28
That story there I rote that's my that I have when they have twins ooooooooo plz make it. When they have twins plz
Guest chapter 1 . 1/28
O o oooooooo pop goes the wessle oaaaaaaaaaaaaa. It's a girl nonono hicup it's a boy it has da log thingy between his legs see oooooooooooookay than dat other on is a girl? Yes the other one is a girl wait I had twins ididnt even feel here pop out of me wow
Haydn Gao chapter 1 . 1/9
A very well written piece that captures the reader.
Maddy chapter 1 . 12/17/2014
Nice story
Brigitta chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
I loved it!
emily chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
ohhhh
myyy
god
emily chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
:0
rambo chapter 1 . 11/27/2014
that was awesome...very detailed and you captured hiccup and astrids every emotion. this is the best fan fiction iv read. 10,000 dragons out of 10... you should write another one like this.
icebird036 chapter 1 . 11/15/2014
thi is absolutely amazing!dont stop writing.
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