Reviews for The Very First Time
Armybro37 chapter 1 . 1/28
That story there I rote that's my that I have when they have twins ooooooooo plz make it. When they have twins plz
Guest chapter 1 . 1/28
O o oooooooo pop goes the wessle oaaaaaaaaaaaaa. It's a girl nonono hicup it's a boy it has da log thingy between his legs see oooooooooooookay than dat other on is a girl? Yes the other one is a girl wait I had twins ididnt even feel here pop out of me wow
Haydn Gao chapter 1 . 1/9
A very well written piece that captures the reader.
Maddy chapter 1 . 12/17/2014
Nice story
Brigitta chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
I loved it!
emily chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
ohhhh
myyy
god
emily chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
:0
rambo chapter 1 . 11/27/2014
that was awesome...very detailed and you captured hiccup and astrids every emotion. this is the best fan fiction iv read. 10,000 dragons out of 10... you should write another one like this.
icebird036 chapter 1 . 11/15/2014
thi is absolutely amazing!dont stop writing.
Omh chapter 1 . 11/14/2014
YESYESYES
Nagareboshi Star chapter 1 . 10/31/2014
I liked it how you portrayed their feelings, and Hiccup's shyness was just adorable.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/27/2014
Sooooo gross
matt chapter 1 . 9/13/2014
wow you realy out did your self this fan fiction was outsanding and one of the best how to train your dragon sex seans ive ever wread
Queen Valka chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
Oh my gods! This was so funny and cute and a little gross but I love it!
Chepelle chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
Omg so romantic I read it two times!
60 | Page 1 2 3 .. Last Next »