Reviews for The Very First Time
IpperDragon chapter 1 . 6/25
I really like how you had them learn from each other. Perhaps a little unrealistic for a first time, but that is how young lovers should openly communicate about what they like. Preferably as husband and wife, but I'm old fashioned that way. I waited until I met my wife.
Maddie Carter chapter 1 . 4/25
I liked the story great job!
lucy chapter 1 . 4/14
I love this, it is really pleasing. I kind of have a crush on hiccup so that's probably why I love this so much. can someone find out if they make out in httyd 3? thx
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15
i like this one a lot! it's not like most "first time" fics where they just seem to automatically know what to do. this one is much more realistic because you first time is usually pretty awkward and you just have to learn how everything works. great work!
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 1 . 1/15
it was rush but i guess it was good
kyroshifterk47 chapter 1 . 12/10/2016
That was a good well put together keep up the good work
beast chapter 1 . 11/23/2016
That other guy chapter 1 . 10/21/2016
Love this story so well made and still in character. Great work :-)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/7/2016
that is a lot of words
Guest chapter 1 . 9/4/2016
You kept them very in-character. Love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2016
very erotic i personally loved it and extremly was just...amazing to read
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2016
I liked it
Richman28 chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
great story
Guest chapter 1 . 5/5/2016
wtf this is a pile of shit
Guest chapter 1 . 4/30/2016
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