|Reviews for Why Fate was Cruel|
| angelxofxmine chapter 5 . 6/27/2013
Yay you updated I want more of this! Its so brill !
| Paradoxium chapter 4 . 6/13/2013
...Hold on while I slowly bleach my burning eyeballs... Just so you know, daaaanng got smut much? Haha okay, now I'm gunna get into my serious face now...0.0...o.o...-_-... Okay now I'm ready to review this story.
As you already know, my friend, I'm not very much into hardcore yaoi but overall I thought that the story was good. Well written and lots of description. I have to say though, I'm actually way intrigued by Fate and lady death(death reminds me of your jinx...O.o coincident I'm thinking not..haha) but I really like the kind of teacher/student vibe between the two and the way they interact with each other.
I really can't say anything about characters being OOC or anything since I've never really watched Once Upon A Time, but I enjoyed their personalities and such.
Kudos from Your dearest best friend,
| Yoyi-Yi chapter 4 . 6/10/2013
Oh! OH! Yes. HAhaha, you humored me without knowing it hahaha.
What are Death and Fate do now? :)
| Yoyi-Yi chapter 3 . 6/10/2013
Aw! Nooo! I prefer Rumpel as bottom :( Noooo... T.T NUuuuuu! x'(
Ah! I have started this, so I'll try next chapter... But still... ;_;
| Yoyi-Yi chapter 2 . 6/10/2013
Awww! Poor Milah. She made the wrong choice. She is already regretting it.
| Yoyi-Yi chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
I didn't read your first version, but I like this. x3
| angelxofxmine chapter 4 . 3/28/2013
Aw please update and do a sequel this was amazing! I need more of this!
| IcyFrozenFairies chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
sequel! this is a good story, sequel is definitely needed!
| vicky chapter 4 . 1/5/2013
i need the sequel! :-)
| Shabby Abby chapter 4 . 12/30/2012
That was pretty sad, but it gets happier...right? Please?
| MissiB chapter 2 . 11/12/2012
"GET OFF ME, I'M WITH YOUR WIFE!"
Yeah...Great argument, Killian. LOL! Seriously, this was so funny!
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/7/2012
ooh oh oh! I don't know why I love this, I just do!
| Syentirb chapter 3 . 11/7/2012
Huh. I didn't really ever think about these two together...but I like it!
It's actually quite intriguing and I look forward to the next chapter.
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/3/2012
Oh PLEASE I need this sooooooo much! I'll never watch the Crocodile the same way again! Thank you so VERY much!
| Gaaras-Sex-Kitten chapter 2 . 11/4/2012
Awsome Awsome Awsome please keep writing. When i saw these two on screen together for the first time i thought they were perfect for each other. Thanks for writing it out fire me.