Reviews for Protector of the Protector
Guest chapter 3 . 8/31/2014
I really liked that you added a baby and moved the story further in time. I like this better than how the last chapter ended.
DissolutionistPen chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
Greetings! I liked your story :) I don't usually like it when authors use 2nd person but you actually pulled it off well! There was only onE point in the last chapter where I got confused (I didn't pick up at first that Kel was pregnant), but other then that it was great. And I just liked how it was about the gryphon. He never seems to get enough fanfiction! I kinda want to write one about him now myself. I blame that completely on you! Lol anyway, great job, seriously and hopefully you write some more stuff for the Tortallan novels!
Pen
KaliOfDarknesss chapter 3 . 8/8/2014
Awwwwww! Just noticed this new part here!
Geminia chapter 3 . 7/16/2014
Aww! Of course we still read this fic! The gryphon is awesome and I wish he had been included more in the stories :) Keep writing!

Gemini
Baby Fawn chapter 2 . 6/1/2014
This was real good I wonder if you will do another on of her and the ghryphon wow I can not spell it seems this one was real good. Would read more about them if you did right more
t.m.w.13 chapter 2 . 12/31/2013
I like
Wolf9lucky chapter 2 . 9/14/2013
LOVE IT!
Rain Addict CM chapter 2 . 9/11/2013
Damn that was so cool. Great story. Great idea :)
Heartdancer chapter 2 . 3/29/2013
Wow. This is really, really good. Very well written, and the second person POV makes it even better.
missgrant chapter 2 . 3/13/2013
Loved it! :o)
ziva10 chapter 2 . 3/11/2013
awesome story
Wise-wren-owl chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
I love it. Will there be more to the story? I would read it if there was.
Lady-Knight-Sam-Carter chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
love :) and I agree that the griffin shouldn't have been disappeared the way it was.
Jazz379705 chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
This is such a cute story. I wish that you would continue this story with more scenes between Kel and the Griffin. I never wanted him to leave Kel
Karakot chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
this is to cute. very well done good job.
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